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Amidst misconceptions and reconciliation, the lines that separate the Wizarding World will be destroyed. Enemies will serve one another as friendships are tested and forged. But first, the Sorting Hat Who Will Not Sort has a message for Hogwarts...

Warnings: some OOC (with reason). Definite and unabashed alternate universe, here: takes place from the beginning of sixth year. Snape and Harry interaction doesn't start until chapter 4.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 52 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Feb 2007 / 20 Sep 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: ONE: You're No Wizard 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Hmmm. So Dudley is likely a Squib? That's an interesting idea. I do like how the two boys are developing a healthier relationship. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    ...hope I don't disappoint you, but what Dudley truly is has not been answered by the end of this story, and likely won't be addressed until the end of the sequel.

    -K


Title: Chapter 3: TWO: the Sorting Hat's Swan Song 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Goodness! Even give the chapter title I wasn't expecting that! Wow! This has certainly set the cats among the pigeons (my apologies to Professor McGonagall for the metaphor). Now just haveto rush on to the next chapter! Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    -K


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I don't know why I hadn't found your story before now, but I'm glad I did. This first chapter is so well-written. I really like how you get into HArry's head. I did find one quibble. HArry's birthday is July 31st so he'd have four weeks till the beginning of classes, not one. Not to worry though. That didn't interrupt my immersion in the tale nor my enjoyment. On to Chapter Two!

    Author's Response:

    Now that I've reached the end of all of your reviews, let me say that it's awesome to see someone who comments on every chapter s/he reads.  I really appreciate getting feedback on each bit; it helps me become a better writer (even though this story is admittedly pretty ancient as far as that goes.)  I hope you'll continue to review, and read the sequel on ff-dot-net when you're through!

    -K


Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue 30 Jul 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    You have written one of the best fics I've ever read in regards to plot, characterization, everything! I'm going to head over to your fanfiction.net page and start reading the sequel.

    I wish that I had found your story sooner than I did but this way I never had to wait for the next chapter to be posted.

    Thank you so much!

    Author's Response:

    Thank YOU for reviewing so often.  It really is a gift to me.  I post fanfiction in order to get feedback and get a feel for what worked for the reader and what didn't; you even gave me some good fic ideas!

    Can't wait to see what you think of GoG.  :)

    -K


Harry, Hermione, and Draco find they have much in common...their disturbing home lives. Along with a certain potions professor, the three help one another overcome their demons. Hermione's mum's dead and her father blames her. Vernon and Lucius are merciless.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Rape
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Sep 2009 / 01 Jan 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Vow 07 Feb 2008
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Wow! What an intense and very well done story! I hope you plan on continuing it. I've added it to my favorites and hope to see a new chapter sometime.

Harry is hurt and loses his voice. Will Snape help him find it again?

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007
Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 10 Dec 2007
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I am so glad to have found this story. I thin I may have said that in an earlier review but it bears repeating. I love the way Severus and Harry's relationship is developing and in a way that they are both still in character. Are you going to tell us what the signs that Harry uses to refer to Severus are? I have my suspicions but at this point in time they remain only that.

    I look forward to the continuation of this wonderfully written story.

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    Readers will definitely find out what signs Harry is using, but not *quite* yet, I don't think.

    Thank you so much for your kind review ;) 


Harry is trapped with Snape in a blizzard, hiding from Death Eaters. Snape makes a last attempt at teaching him Occlumency. Written for aunty_marion's birthday, with the prompt "Snape and knitting."

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Feb 2007 / 05 Feb 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Click-Click-Clack-Clack 21 Aug 2008
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    This is such a lovely piece of writing. Definitely AU but somehow, I'm not surprised that Severus would know how to knit. It's a practical skill, like sewing and anyone who may have come from an economically straitened household would learn sich things in order to keep clothes and such in repair. Then later on I can see Severus using it as he does here as a focus for occulmency. I think the biggest error canon Snape made in regards to teaching Harry is to forget that it is much easier to focus on a specific thing rather than think of nothing. The wool yarn and the action of knitting is perfect for this as it involves almost all the senses; the feel, look, and even smell of the yarn, the sound of hte knitting needles, the pattern of stitches... simple and complex at the same time. Actually, that is a good desription of Severus, isn't it? Maybe that is why I have no problem with the idea of him sitting there knitting.

    Am I correct in my assumption that any use of magic would have brought the Deatheaters down on them?

    This is wonderful. Thanks for sharing it.

Sequel to Forlorn Hope and Forlorn Dream. "But here they stand, against my very wish, and push me toward my goal. Not with fists or words or thoughts, but by their very hopes and dreams, they call for me to live." Horris

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Dec 2012 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: Forlorn Saga - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4: Summer’s Interlude 24 Oct 2007
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I am looking forward to the continuation of this saga. The premises of the Aspidis and of how Severus fathered Harry/Horris are some of the most original ideas I have come across in HP fanfiction, not just the Severitus challenge fics. The three-dimensionality of all the characters is wonderful and though I should have mentioned it in a review of Forlorn Hope instead of waiting until I finished this chapter, I had no problem whatsoever with the reasons you had behind Ron Weasley joining Voldemort. Everything you've done with this AU fic is connected so well to things in the original books; so much so that I never once found my suspension of disbelief falling.

    A wonderful job and I gladly add you to my list of favourite authors. I am going to recommend this series to my many HP friends and I hope that you find yuorself getting many more positive reviews.

    Very truly yours,

    Dancingkatz aka Christine

Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4: Summer’s Interlude 13 Oct 2008
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    This series is wonderful. Is there any chance of more being written?

Years after the Final Battle, Harry Potter is teaching Potions at Hogwarts. Severus Snape has disappeared, but a certain black haired first-year piques Harry's curiosity. Response to Shamenka's Counterpole challenge for the P&S Fic Fest 2.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Reverse Roles > Teacher Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 May 2007 / 01 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Counterpole
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 25 Jun 2008
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Are you going to carry on with this story? I think it is an intersting idea and I want to know what it is that Harry is researching and what has turned him into someone even snarkier than Snape. You have a good writing technique and it was a pleasure to read something free of spelling and grammar errors that flowed well.


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