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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 28 Oct 2012
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Oh, I am looking forward to the next chapter! I'm intrigued by the changes you've made to the beginning of Prisoner of Azkaban, and I really like the flow of the story. It's nicely paced, and it definitely kept my interest.
Snape's dismissal of the Knight Bus was SO in character for him! *grin* And thanks for writing Harry so that he sounds like recently turned 13 year old. It's quite refreshing to see him behave his age, and to "hear" him talk like a child of that age really would.
This is definitely going to be a story for which I will keep watching for updates.
Well done!
COMPLETE. Harry and Hermione go to a prestigious summer school, where Snape is a teacher. Unfortunately for Harry, Snape has spoken to the other staff and is on his way to turning the whole school against Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 20: Bet My Life
| 09 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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More please! This is an exceptionally wonderful story. I love the concept of the Gemini school, and I found all aspects of the storyline thus far very intriguing. I particularly thought that the way you turned Snape's opinions of Harry from despising him to helping him was extremely well developed and that the changes all make sense and are well presented. Well done!
On that fateful Halloween, Severus entered Godric's Hollow to find Voldemort dead and Lily and Harry missing. The mystery sent Sirius Black so insane that he spent the next three years searching for them. He found them. It was not a happy discovery. Warning, begins with gothic horror but becomes a sweeter story as the chapters go on.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 5
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Completed: No
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Updated: 16 Aug 2014 / 19 Feb 2014
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Missing
| 22 Aug 2018
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow! What an amazingly creepy and heart-breaking beginning. I am so glad I don't need to wait for the next chapter to be published! *reading on...*
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 11 Jun 2017
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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More please! :-D
I am really enjoying this story. I feel very badly for Harry and Severus both, because they have so much to overcome considering their past relationship. I look forward to seeing how they grow and change and interact as they go through this effort to properly heal Harry of all of his past injuries. And, I must admit, that I'm really looking forward to seeing how the Dursley's and Umbridge are dealt with...
I wish there were more pages to turn! :-)
When Harry arrived at Hogwarts, no one expected Professor Snape to be his favourite teacher – no one, except the mysteriously familiar witch teaching DADA. AU. Romance tag is for Lily/Severus, but isn't relevant until later in the story.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: The Ever-Changing and Unpredictable
| 11 Jul 2017
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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More please!--Shen your muse gives the words to you. I really like this concept, and look forward to seeing where this goes. :-)
Author's Response: More coming! Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. :)
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