Slytherin!
When Vernon discovers Harry can't do magic during his first summer back from Hogwarts, he loses it when the cake falls on his clients. Completely AU version of the Severitus challenge beginning during the summer after first year.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by omega13a
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Rape, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Nov 2008 / 21 Jul 2008
Series: Vows Series - Challenges: None
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Nov 2008 / 21 Jul 2008
Series: Vows Series - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 23: A Visit from Father Christmas | 14 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- I can turn off the tickle reaction in my feet. I had to because my dad would occasionally wake me up by tickling me there... I can control it to a certain extend in my neck but I can't keep it up for long there.
Anyways, good chapter and it will be interesting to see how the school will react when they find out Harry has a pet snake...
Author's Response: I WISH I could turn it off in my feet! I get right violent, kicking, if someone goes for the feet!
Sickly and neglected by his caregivers, little Harry would not have survived were it not for the mysterious dark angel who watched over him, caring for him when he was sick. Harry never knew his name, until he attended Hogwarts and discovered a certain teacher bore a remarkable resemblance to his savior.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 46 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Heals like Magic
Chapters: 46 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Heals like Magic
| Title: Chapter 45: The Skybolt Championship | 16 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Good chapter. Are you planning to make a sequel to this story? You should. There's a loose end. Voldemort. He's still out there. Have Severus as Harry's adoptive father should make for an interesting fight against Voldemort.
Author's Response: You're right, he's still lurking, but this time Harry will have Severus to help him fight the old serpent and I am considering a sequel.
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Locked in a cage for six years, Harry is found abused, neglected, and virtually wild by none other than Severus Snape. Will he ever become a normal child, or will six years of abuse prove to be too much for him.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 May 2009 / 16 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 May 2009 / 16 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 12 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Please continue this story. Its good so far. The only other story like this was abandoned. It will be ashamed if this one is abandoned as well.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 24 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Poor Severus. Having the temp transfigurations were off. Severus will definitely need to find some way to communicate with Harry. The sooner the better. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha.. Well, a lesson learned and all that. Harry enjoyed being in with his clothes. It is hard for him not being able to have a proper conversation with the boy, but Harry listens, if you notice... The hard thing is that Severus isn't sure how much Harry understands and how much is going over his head.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 26 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- A house elf that calls Severus dude? I don't see how he could be alive. He must have been raised by a family of hippie house elves.
Taking Harry shopping would prove interesting. I think it would be best if Severus work Harry up to it by getting Harry used to more and more people before taking him on a shopping trip and even then Severus should do it at a time when there aren't crowds of people around.
Anyways, keep up the good work!
Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Snape are summoned to appear in front of a mysterious Council. Snape is instructed to adopt Harry Potter!
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Sep 2008 / 05 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Sep 2008 / 05 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 9: You're A Bully! | 11 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Assuming Harry is still one year old in your story, then the only Weasley at Hogwarts would be Bill and Bill would be a first year. That's according to the chronology on Wikipedia.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chronology_of_the_Harry_Potter_stories#Births
I probably should print that out before I make some mistake about a person's age in one of the fan fictions I'm writing.
Anyways, good story and don't fret over peoples ages. You are writing something that is clearly alternate universe and it is acceptable to get people's ages wrong.
Harry is just about to have his 10th birthday but something goes awfully wrong and the family is never the same and Harry eventually finds out the truth about who he is.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Oct 2008 / 20 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Oct 2008 / 20 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: So It Begins..... | 24 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Plot wise, I would say good start and I'm very interested in reading more. However, you have a lot of grammar mistakes that make it hard to read at times. If you want, I can proof read what you write before you post it.
After the Dursleys' deaths - yeah, I cried, too - Snape unwillingly becomes seven-year-old Harry's guardian. How long will it take for him to give his archenemy's son a chance? WARNING: Contains corporal punishment, i.e. spanking, of a child.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2009 / 15 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2009 / 15 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: The Land of Nod | 16 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- I have a hunch Noddy is going to be getting clothes when Snape realizes the truth... Anyways, good story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Clothes . . . Crucio . . . why be picky? :o) I'm trying not to spoil the ending, but I hope to have an update done soon, anyway. Thanks for the review!
For every action, there is a consequence. Even for neglecting to brush your hair. Drabble.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Oct 2008 / 25 Oct 2008
Series: Path Not Taken - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Oct 2008 / 25 Oct 2008
Series: Path Not Taken - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 25 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Severus is evil. LOL! Reading this made waking up early worth it.
Author's Response: Glad I could help! =)
Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and a caring family to cope with.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Torture
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: Harry and his New Family - Challenges: None
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: Harry and his New Family - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit | 17 Mar 2009 |
| Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) |
- Umm, somewhere in the last part of the chapter, lunch became dinner. Other then that, good chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I corrected it! Thanks for telling me! To be honest I didn't know that their is a different between them, Now I know! Thank you very much for your review!