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Title: Chapter 1: Where Angels Fear to Tread
| 01 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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It was well written but I never like stories where Harry dies, hero or not, sorry.
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Remembrance & Recovery
| 12 Aug 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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I think it truly sucks that you killed off Ophelia!!! Was it really necessary? Really? Why the basilisk poison? If she really did break the vow, wouldn't she have died naturally? Sorry, but sticking to my opinion that you shouldn't have killed her, Tevin NEEDS a mother!!!!!!
Author's Response: It is unfortunate that Ophelia had to end in the way she did. But it is very much necessary for this story. Without her death, the story cannot go anywhere; it would become stagnant and nothing would move forward. The basilisk poison was a merciful death. As evidenced in HP:DH, the venom from a basilisk works pretty darned quick to kill someone, after all. Without it, and Snape's mercy in administering it, she would have suffered a long period of agony as she went delirious/insane as her blood boiled in her body and brain, which would be a far more painful and barbaric death than fast-acting poison. Yes, Tevin does need a mother, but he will have to do without in the event of her death. It's harsh and horrible, but it must be. I hope this helps a little without spoiling the next few chapters. Thank you for your review. I hope you continue to read as the last several chapters are posted. Thanks. ~ RK
Sirius and Remus have raised Harry since he was little. When Harry starts Hogwarts, Snape calls a conference to discuss his abominable behaviour. Just how will our favourite Marauders react to that!? Response to ObsidianEmbrace’s challenge of the same name. Dedicated to Laura Hisel, AYC’s 1000th reviewer!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 06 Sep 2009 / 06 Sep 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: Parent Teacher Conference
Title: Chapter 1: Parent-Teacher Conference
| 28 Jul 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Great story, though the end was a bit depressing!
Harry Potter starts Hogwarts with high hopes of finding himself a real family, and holds tightly to this hope despite the torture his new Potion's Master seems intent on putting him through. Can Harry's hope hold out long enough to see his dream through?
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: All That Was
| 21 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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I do hope Snivellous changes his attitude soon cause he's really starting to piss me off!!!!!!! Not sure I even want to read the next chapter, have to think about it for a bit!
Author's Response: The challenge I was responding to with this story required that he be like that. If you stop now you'll miss all the good that is to come.
The only element of consistency in Harry Potter's life always seemed to be the death of the people who cared about him, the people he loved. One more death, so soon after the last, pushes Harry over the edge. He never would have expected to find solace in such an unlikely place. But with his heart and mind engulfed in a torrent of pain, that is exactly what he finds there.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 27 Sep 2009 / 27 Sep 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: That Which He Needs
| 12 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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It might have been better if you'd continued a bit further.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review.
Title: Chapter 1: That Which He Needs
| 12 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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It might have been better if you'd continued a bit further.
Title: Chapter 1: That Which He Needs
| 25 May 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: An Oath to Her
| 09 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Well so much for his oath to the woman he supposedly loved, what a jerk!!! What was the point of this story?
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 24 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Any plans to continue the story?????
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 11 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed)
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Interesting, different, but interesting, so far anyway.
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