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| Poirot [Contact]
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| Member since: 07 Jan 2008
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| 41 yo Mother & Grandmother. Also Knit Counter from PA [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Son . . .But Mine
| 20 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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I think this is the best chapter yet! It's about time someone gave that manipulative old coot what for! I always wanted someone who cared about Harry to protect him from becoming a sacrifice, and you have written it beautifully!
Thanks for a wonderful story, please update soon!
Author's Response: You're welcome, I love writing Severus being all protective of his son.
Title: Chapter 12: Sibling Rivalry
| 24 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Oh My God! They won't be able to sit for a week! Perhaps Snape should also have them write essays about positive traits of the other.
As always, great job!
Author's Response: Thanks and you'll find out what Severus does in the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 26: Hedwig's Surprise
| 23 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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The food fight was brilliant and really illustrated the growth in the boys relationship.
Sev's reaction to Harry's grades was perfectly written and exactly the reassurance he needed.
Thanks for the terrific chapter! I prefer staying at the Taj when in A.C. :)
Author's Response: Okay, I'll let them know! LOL! Incidentally that food fight was based on a real one my nephews had and they were cousins who didn't get along either in the beginning just like Harry and Draco, so a lot of this story is based upon them. I'm glad you liked the way Sev handled Harry's grade issue, I didn't want to make him be too harsh.
Title: Chapter 28: The Wizard and the Warrior
| 28 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Another terrific chapter! I can't wait to see how Harry's discussion with his dad goes. I hope Sev reassures the boys that they will always be first and that he has enough love to share.
Thanks again for a truly compeeling story.
Author's Response: He will, though the boys also need to understand that Sev needs someone to be there for him too!
Title: Chapter 29: A Hunting We Will Go
| 30 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Another great chapter........but I hate the evil cliffhanger!
Author's Response: I know, but it was necessary!
Title: Chapter 31: Unexpected Tidings
| 05 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Another great chapter! Thank you! Can't wait for the trial and Ron's reaction to the caring between Draco and Harry.
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Author's Response: The trial is coming up, I should have it posted sometime tonight. But Ron and Harry's meeting will be later on, as you'll see.
Title: Chapter 32: The Scales Of Justice
| 06 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Great chapter! Very realistic courtroom scene, and I loved the part when Draco confided in Harry.
Thanks again
Author's Response: You're welcome. I tried to make that part as realisitc as possible. My friend Linda, who is an attorney helped me out a lot. if you're interested, i have a new fic posted that takes place during SS called Arms of a Dark Angel. It has Snape as a secret guardian "angel" to harry during that time.
Title: Chapter 35: Farewell to Prince Manor
| 19 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Absolutely fabulous! Sequel please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm considering a sequel and until then, there's always Arms of a Dark Angel, which I just updated and Where Shadows Go.
Title: Chapter 13: Past Reconciliation
| 24 Nov 2009
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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gREAT STORY...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the next chapter just posted!
A summer road trip through Muggle America comes to a halt when the car that Ron, Hermione, and Harry have purchased breaks down. Walking to the nearest gas station, Harry encounters the last person he thought he ever wanted to see…and his 1987 Camaro. But there’s a side to Severus Snape that no one knows about: a free riding rebel that would rather don older rock tees than robes and still breaks rules wherever he can. Little do they know it, but the Golden Trio is in for one hell of a summer. - Summer after sixth Year - Non-HBP and DH compliant
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Title: Chapter 5: Barbecues, Swimming, Lost Loves, Firecracers, and Oh! a Severus too!
| 24 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Amazing chapter! I loved the party, it's great to see the kids have some fun.
I'd like to see az little more development of Lizzie's character and you totally surprised me by having Lucius show up. What an ending! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Lizzie will be gone into in chapter 6. I wanted to spend time on her and Severus' relationship but I figured I'd be rushed if I did it now. Don't worry, she's a pretty cool chick. :)
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