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| Better be  Hufflepuff!
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I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord. Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. [Report This]
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COMPLETE. Harry and Hermione go to a prestigious summer school, where Snape is a teacher. Unfortunately for Harry, Snape has spoken to the other staff and is on his way to turning the whole school against Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
| Title: Chapter 3: When It Rains...
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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My goodness, some teachers need to grow up and start treating all their students equally! Loving it so far, nice plot, very interesting and I love the mental images you create--and the time you spent making those visual images! :D
| Title: Chapter 4: Professor Horrible
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Typo here, I think. ( The first team to incapacitate both of their opponents gets the high mark for today. The first team to have both members incapacitated will get a failing mark for the day.)
The second sentence was backward?
Poor Harry, I just want to hug him!
Author's Response: It's just saying the first team wins and the first team out loses.
| Title: Chapter 5: From The Inside Out
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Snape scares me in this chapter, I dread (and yet am so excited) to see what will happen next! Awesome writing, :D
| Title: Chapter 6: In The Darkness...
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Great chapter! :) Thanks for sharing!
| Title: Chapter 7: A Day Without Rain
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Another awesome chapter, :) Liking how the story is developing!
| Title: Chapter 8: A New Schedule
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I like your descriptive writing, :) Keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 9: The Tutors
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Love the picture! Nice chapter as well, :D
| Title: Chapter 10: The Size Of Things
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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haha, if Snape got too nice I wouldn't want to read the story anyway, I don't like out-of-character. ^_^ Nice chapter!
| Title: Chapter 11: Tradition
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Cool competition, I like your characterization, :)
| Title: Chapter 13: What He Wanted
| 05 Aug 2014
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Love it! Thanks for sharing and please update when you can, :)
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