Hufflepuff!
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HBP Alternative Universe. Harry acquires a surprising new ally as he struggles to overcome his grief and accept the burden of the Prophecy.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Scorpia
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jun 2008 / 01 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jun 2008 / 01 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 04 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Oh No! Harry, why did you go and get caught. Tsk, tsk. Great job, I love the way you portray the characters. And the angst is lovely, :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Heh, angst and mush are my specialties!
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 04 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Severus to the rescue! I'm so gleeful, lol. I love the way you write, very exciting. I loved reading about the Order even though it was just a little bit about them.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Action scenes are harder for me so I'm really glad you liked this part!
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 04 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Recovery time soon? I hope Harry's not mental, :( That would just be horrible!
Thank you for writing this story I'm enjoying it muchly, :P
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Recovery time coming up!
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Fleur is mary sue-ish? Are you sure because I'm enjoying her having brains instead of just being arm candy for Bill. You gave her something to do rather then sit there prettily and talk with a french accent. Really enjoying the long chapters, you rock! The end was sad, Albus, you need to watch what you say around Severus. You hurt his feelings, :(
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted Fleur to be more than a pretty face. If she was her school's champion it only makes sense for her to have some brains and talent, too. But I can see why she could be considered a Mary Sue, too. It almost makes her too perfect. But since she's a very minor character here, I decided maybe it didn't matter.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Beautiful chapter. I love that Harry is awake. It's cute how Severus isstarting to see Harry differently but pretending not to, lol. Boys will be boys I guess, they never change. :) Great story.
Author's Response: Yes, Severus does have a hard time admitting he was wrong. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Awww! I'm still grinning like an idiot, lol. That was SO sweet Kriteh! You write the mushy stuff great, (snicker). Thank you for this chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do love mush.
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Hehe, is Snape is going mad (like he thinks he is) I sure am enjoying it, lol. Characters should go nuts more often, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Last line rocked, I'm giggleing like a school girl...and although i AM a schoolgirl I DO NOT giggle--usually, lol. Great chappie!
Author's Response: Aw, come on...you know you like a good giggle! Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Good boy Snape. Being good to Harry like you are, :). I noticed a few places where there were double spaces but not any mistakes.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Sequel to Brothers and Fathers. Tobias, Severus, and Harry are at Hogwarts and school is in session. But nothing can ever be easy for the Snape family.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Oct 2010 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Oct 2010 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Close Encounters | 13 Jan 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- I love it whens theres monsters in Hogwarts! It adds danger and excitement! I'm angry at Serenity. Grrr.
Author's Response:
lol.
Monsters are fun to play with. :)
Don't worry I'm angry at Serenity too, but that probably a good thing.
Thanks for the review!