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Unexpected results, after a potions assignment, leave Severus and Harry struggling with reality. A forced stay at Grimmauld Place, that includes Draco, doesn't help matters.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Attackfish
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 28 Feb 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 28 Feb 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 23 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- "Malfoys are want to do"
In this case, "want" should be spelled "wont" as in "It was his wont"
Author's Response: I have fixed this. Thank you. I really appreciate you pointing this out to me. I knew something about that word didn't look right when I gave this chapter a re-read. I just forgot to take the time to investigate.
A Severitus written in a series of 100-word scenes. Warnings: bad language, friendly Slytherins, unfriendly Gryffindors (so far), more than a few cliches. Inspired by Bil's Drabble Challenge. Some word counts may be off because the site sees some formatting options as words. I'm not sure why some are counted as less than 100. Counting actual words, every chapter is exactly 100 words.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 May 2008 / 28 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 May 2008 / 28 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge
| Title: Chapter 21: Gold | 30 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- I love this story so far. Cliched, yes, as you said, but intriguing and gripping despite it. i like Snape and lupin's reactions. Please update as soon as possible.
There are many forms of vengeance. It can be just as satisfying to return cruelty with kindness as to return cruelty with equal cruelty...and sometimes it can be more dangerous and more insidious to do so. Faced with an eleven-year-old Harry Potter, Severus Snape has a decision to make: How does he like his vengeance?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Nov 2008 / 05 May 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Nov 2008 / 05 May 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Two Universes | 05 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Oh, now this one I like. I love Snape's motivation, poor twisted bastard...
| Title: Chapter 3: Cause and Effect | 25 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Thank you for not having Draco and Harry be friends, thankyouthankyouthankyou! So many Harry in Slytherin stories have them as firm friends without remembering that house or no house, they didn't like each other in Diagon Ally.
Author's Response:
Sure thing. I'm not saying I'm opposed to an EVENTUAL Harry/Draco friendship, but it would require a serious amount of character development on both parts. Harry is not exactly going to be friends with someone who reminds him of Dudley: spoiled and bullying. I think Draco could potentially be a nice guy...but it will take years' worth of disillusionment.
What if Dudley was a wizard? And went to Hogwarts? Things aren't looking too good for Harry Potter, or for Severus Snape. AU, of course.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Sep 2010 / 02 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Dudley Goes to Hogwarts
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Sep 2010 / 02 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Dudley Goes to Hogwarts
| Title: Chapter 1: A life not including Dudley | 02 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- You know, as much as a rat as he is, I kinda have to pity Dudley in Slytherin, surrounded by all those pure blooded bigots.
Author's Response: Mwhihhi. That will be an issue, later on. XD
| Title: Chapter 4: Homework and Jam | 04 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Oh good Lord, what on is earth is Snape going to do after that shenanigan?
Author's Response: We'll see.... ... :P
I haven't really decided yet though. :p
When Harry and his new, pretty neighbor are rescued from Privet Drive on the eve of a Death Eater attack, Severus becomes Harry's reluctant guardian and healer in the weeks following. Old prejudices are challenged as Harry's new friend casts her own spell over Hogwarts' Potions Master.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Angels Do Exist. | 30 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Speaking as someone with a lot of allergies, including ones to all petroleum products, scents, and sulfur, his allergy excuse isn't that bad. An allergy to petroleum would eliminate nearly all medicinal gels and creams as well as ordinary lotions, sunscreens, and bug sprays. Also, my cousin is allergic to aloe vera. Because of the nature of our immune systems, people can have an allergy to anything, even mild, gentle, natural things.
Author's Response:
I do realise that people can be allergic to anything at all, even gentle, natural things. But Harry was thinking on the spot, and Erin isn't a medical person, so she just assumes, as would many, that because it is a natural product, it should be OK. She did tell him just to try a tiny bit first.
Thank you for your review.
Lesley
After the Dursleys' deaths - yeah, I cried, too - Snape unwillingly becomes seven-year-old Harry's guardian. How long will it take for him to give his archenemy's son a chance? WARNING: Contains corporal punishment, i.e. spanking, of a child.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2009 / 15 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2009 / 15 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Disneyland Daddy | 16 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Very promising start. Your Dumbledore was beautifully in character, asking and then ordering.
Author's Response: Dumbledore strikes me as one of those who's always nice as long as you do things his way. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 5: Lies and the Lying Liars Who Tell Them | 26 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- Oooooooh, I hate it when Snape and Harry meet in these stories, and Snape gets it right away, and everything gets all mushy and sweet and understanding (not how it would happen) but oh, this just prolongs the agony! I just want to throttle him and say "you blind idiot, why can't you just see what's right in front of your gigantic nose?"
Great chapter, great story, and please post soon again! I can't wait for more, even if it just torments me more.
Author's Response: I hate those fluffy stories, too. I rarely read Snape/Harry guardian stories anyway, but when I first got into fanfic, I caught a glimpse of some. Completely by accident, of course. :o) Nope, Snape will be stupid for a number of chapters, and at no point will he go soft, fluffy, or any such adjective. It's nice to have a handful of masochistic reviewers who support that course of events. Thanks for reviewing!
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A Christmas-y fic that was inspired by the challenge made by Foolish Wishmaker. Harry is left alone at Hogwarts for Christmas, during his seventh year. Bored and lonely, he tries to find something to occupy his time and ends up (as usual) in trouble. Can Snape help him out?
OotP compliant.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
OotP compliant.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Dec 2008 / 11 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas, Animagus Accident
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Dec 2008 / 11 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas, Animagus Accident
| Title: Chapter 1: A Snake is for Life, Not Just for Christmas | 11 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) |
- I really like this story. Snape always seems like the sort who might open up to animals, who can't hurt him emotionally.
“Yes, yes, you are the expert killing machine etcetera, etcetera and I am amazed by your singular skill. Now would you mind going back to sleep while I go and mark the incompetent children’s essays?”
You might want to slip some of the exposition in the first few paragraphs into the rest of the story to start it off faster.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear it - I agree with you, Snape does seem the kind to be more comfortable with animals. I shall bear your advice in mind for future fics - I do have a bad habit of explaining it all straight away! Thanks for reviewing!