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Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by JolisGSD
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 20 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Wow! That was sure an intense chapter. I felt so bad for all three of them, but I also saw hope that Snape and Harry are going to be good for each other.
Is Dumbledore's plan really to bring the two of them together by causing them to join forces against him?
This is a great story. I have to read really carefully to try to understand the charaters through their dialogue.
Thanks for writing. Hope updates can be soon.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 01 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- This is a really, really good story.
Somehow I missed your last update, so I got to read two chapters tonight. That was great.
I am very, very impressed with your writing of both Severus and Harry. I think you are truly portraying them "in canon" as they react to the events in your story.
The relationship is being built, but slowly and cautiously and pretty honestly too. It's very difficult for both of them and your story makes that clear. But yet, as a reader absorbed in your characters, I see hope that both of them are going to benefit enormously when everything is finished.
Very, very good job.
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 | 09 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- excellent chapter. Worth the wait.
| Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 | 17 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Thanks for updating!! Very, very interesting . . . .
Voldemort's forces are growing stronger and more organized. Despite warnings of this by the Order's spy, Harry Potter is captured. When he's rescued, will Snape be able to prove that he is useful as more than just a spy to the Order?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Oct 2007 / 19 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Oct 2007 / 19 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Order of the Pigeon | 24 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Very good.
During the summer before his third year at Hogwarts, Harry somehow ends up in a reality where Severus Snape is his father. AU, Sevitus — Includes Sirius!
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Sep 2009 / 20 Aug 2007
Series: To Have a Father - Challenges: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Sep 2009 / 20 Aug 2007
Series: To Have a Father - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 14: Illness | 03 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Very nice chapter.
This Severus really is nice and loving towards this Harry. I find myself hoping that Harry will stay here, but then what will happen to the wizarding world that he left behind?
After Snape's visit to Surrey, Harry writes a thank-you letter that triggers an extended correspondence and a tentative friendship between the two of them.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Age Difference Romance, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Sep 2009 / 25 Aug 2007
Series: Chivalry - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Sep 2009 / 25 Aug 2007
Series: Chivalry - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Upon Receipt | 07 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- This is great!! I only found this site a couple of weeks ago. Prior to that, I had no idea that there was such a thing as fanfic. This is probably about the sixth story that I've read and I am very impressed. I think you have managed to make Snape's "evolution" very believable.
Please do finish the story when you can -- I'm eager (as I'm sure the rest of your readers are) to see what happens.
Sincerely,
Linda
| Title: Chapter 12: Contents Fragile | 29 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Thank you very much for continuing on with your story.
Good chapter. Lots of information about Luna -- all good -- but it makes me very curious about why we need to know so much about her.
Very intriguing.
| Title: Chapter 13: An Estimated Value | 23 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Thanks so much for updating!
I like your Luna and I like your Snape. I am wondering how you'll be able to resolve this in another chapter and an epilogue -- but waiting eagerly to find out.
| Title: The Poor of God | 27 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Thanks so much for updating! This new spell sounds very interesting.