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When Harry runs away from the Dursleys at the start of 3rd year, he is captured by Death Eaters and nearly killed, resulting in the loss of his magic. Only one man can help him now, Severus Snape, who has just discovered a shocking revelation . . . Harry is his son! Follow Harry and Severus as they attempt to build a relationship, resolve past conflicts, and heal Harry from the trauma he has endured.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by JolisGSD
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Mar 2008 / 29 Feb 2008
Series: Hidden Away - Challenges: None
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Mar 2008 / 29 Feb 2008
Series: Hidden Away - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Lily's Gift | 02 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Hmmmmmm ... Were Snape's memories removed? I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Good story. Good writing.
Author's Response: Ah, now if I told you that . . .it'd spoil the surprise. But . . .the next chapter should be up very soon, like tonight!
| Title: Chapter 5: Done With It | 03 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- not just one surprise, but several!
1. Remus and Severus being good friends
at Hogwarts
2. Severus always being a good guy
3. Severus quitting as potions teacher
4. Severus and Harry leaving Hogwarts
this could be very interesting!!
Author's Response: Right, but I didn't want to give them all away, and the big one, was of course, Sev resigning and taking Harry with him!
When Severus took the Dark Mark, he lost more than he imagined, but with the help of a meddlesome Headmaster and a diary from a time long forgotten, Severus gets a chance at fatherhood, if he himself can survive the encounter. **Rewrite well in progress**
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Aug 2008 / 23 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Aug 2008 / 23 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Never Too Late | 17 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Interesting story.
I like the fact that you're writing this with a lot of Severus' POV. I did think it was kind of sad that Lily didn't have more trust in Severus. I hope you are going to give us more background on why she was living with Potter and if she and Sev were happy before he joined the DE's.
Please keep writing.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're intrieged! I really am trying to keep it even between using Sev's point of view along with Harry's.
It's true, Lily didn't trust Sev much, but she was willing to talk to him again, just before she died, and that speaks volumes. I find her to be incredibly stoubborn...just like Sev.
Yup, more background on Lily, James, Severus, and Harry coming up, not really sure when but it will definatly be covered...sometime.
Believe me, I'm writing. Not as fast or as often as I'd like, but I am.
Thanks for reviewing!
In DH, Harry went down the tunnel to the Shrieking Shack alone and things went a little bit differently.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: The Fallen Prince | 15 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- This is the way the scene should have been in canon.
Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response:
I just couldn't stand to leave things the way they were. The "if only, if only"s would have driven me batty! Thanks for the review! :)
<3 Brandi <3
One-shot where Severus sings "Sweeney Todd". Set in Lily's Charm universe.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 20 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 20 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: A Close Shave | 22 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Pretty funny!!
I could imagine our proper Severus singing the song and thinking of Lily.
Good job.
After Voldemort's defeat, Severus and Harry struggle to overcome the shadows he left behind. Sequel to Lily's Charm.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2009 / 23 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2009 / 23 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hollow | 23 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- And I thought we would see some peace and calm for a little while. How foolish of me (LOL).
Wow, I think there was some serious foreshadowing in this opening chapter. I can tell we're in for more perilous times for Severus and Harry, in for more evil cliffhangers, and lots more angst in one way or another.
Another great story begins . . .
Author's Response: Well, you know. I thought there was going to be peace too. Unfortunately Harry had other plans. :oP There was foreshadowing galore. And wasn't it fun? Thanks for reviewing and glad you liked it.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Hero | 08 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Another great chapter. I like your depiction of Severus and Harry's relationship at this point. They seem comfortable and loving towards each other without some of the anxieties they've both had before.
I like your Scrimgeour too -- we need a new villain (not evil, just kind of wicked) now that Voldemort is gone and Snape is a good guy.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I think with all they've been through...they've bonded pretty solidly. It's hard to share someone's very soul and not bond, I suppose.
Scrimgeour is decidedly wicked. But don't worry about having a villain. Evil still permeates their lives. *waggles eybrows* Don't you just love Snape as a good guy? I do.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Deflation | 29 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- Another great chapter. I'm hoping they are going to figure out what is wrong with Harry.
Author's Response: Well, they better or the story will be over. LOL
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Betrayal | 21 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- This is truly torturous to have to wait even a couple of days for each new chapter.
Author's Response: I do enjoy the torture, I must admit. LOL
| Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Sweaters, Snitches and Snowballs | 07 Mar 2009 |
| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) |
- A very very nice chapter. I didn't actually cry, but came close. Very moving.
It was wonderful to see a happy Harry and a Severus who is at peace with a son he loves and even some friends.
Author's Response: Thanks! Which part made you almost cry? Surely not for Sirius? :oP And I agree, it is nice to see Severus with some people in his life.