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Sev, Lily, and Harry are trying to live as a happy family, running an apothecary in Diagon Alley, after Lily divorced James years before. But James keeps trying to sabotage their relationship out of petty jealousy and tries to get custody of Harry by badmouthing Severus and attempting to ruin his reputation, using all his money and connections to do so. Features a Good! Tom Riddle. An eventually redeemed and de-aged James Potter also. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Scourgify! and Needle in a Haystack
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Title: Chapter 10: Happy Birthday Harry
| 23 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Aw. Cute! And James is coming around, that's good. I hope that he and Sev can learn to deal with each other. I mean, they probably won't ever like each other, but it's possible for them to respect each other. My Dad and my stepdad have never said a bad word about each other. It would be cool if Snape and Potter could get to that point.
Title: Chapter 11: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 01 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Good chapter, but I think you might try working on showing instead of telling, and not repeating yourself. For example, you could have left the statement saying that Eric went to peer out the window. The fact that he wanted to be the first to see the Dursleys was implied. Trust yourself as a writer; you can get the message across without needing to explain what every action and gesture means. Well written actions speak for themselves.
Title: Chapter 2: Yuletide Fueds
| 18 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Very cute. Will Snape ever realize that Harry was the mitten boy?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Yes, Snape will realize that Harry was the one he gave the mittens to, but not sure when, it could really soon. :-D
Title: Chapter 4: The Night Before Christmas
| 02 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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I expected the ending once you'd said his neck was broken (I'm working on a story about paralysis as well). Is it going to be permanent? And is his paralyzed from the neck down or from the waist down?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Good job on the guessing. I can't say if it will be permanent but it's a major part of the story to get the ball rolling so to speak. He's paralyzed from the waist down. Thanks again! -Autumn
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Good job on the guessing. I can't say if it will be permanent but it's a major part of the story to get the ball rolling so to speak. He's paralyzed from the waist down. Thanks again! -Autumn
On Christmas Eve, an unwanted child is left in a manger and found by a young Potions Master, changing both their lives forever. AU, implied child abuse, neglect, possible CP, Sev raises Harry.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 5: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear
| 16 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Hermy from Rudolph the Red Nosed Raindeer- You Can't Fire Me, I Quit
Same House as Last Time
Author's Response: You won!! Congratulations and here's your House points and cookies and cocoa! I love that movie and couldn't resist having a quote from it in here. BTW, I've updated again!
Title: Chapter 3: A Series of Unfortunate Events
| 15 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Why does everyone keep fainting? I have never in my life seen someone faint from shock. It might have happened to women once or twice years ago because they were wearing corsets and their oxygen supply was limited, but it doesn't really happen any more. Certainly not as often as you depict it. It ends up sounding silly.
Author's Response: comic effect, my friend! It's meant to sidetrack people from the seriousness. An aside, I suppose. It might also have been a result of my exasperation at my school workload...and why my fever refuses to come down... thanks for reviewing =) ~shige
Title: Chapter 32: Flying and Digging
| 26 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Hermione's such a girl *rolls eyes*.
Good chapter.
Author's Response: She worries. :-D
Title: Chapter 82: The Custody Hearing
| 13 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Harry liked green. Green and silver. Green and silver tinsel, all over Snape’s couch. And the Potions Master in not impressed. But then he wasn’t in the best mood to begin with.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 14 Dec 2009 / 14 Dec 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Twining
| 14 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Believe
| 18 Dec 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Aw, that's cute. I like it because younger audiences can read it as well.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad ya liked it!
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