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Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
| 08 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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I thought the CD thing was fine, it makes the wizarding world a bit more palpable. update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 10: Hogwarts
| 26 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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are you writing a sequel??
Title: Chapter 14: Not Much Further
| 20 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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OMG! I feel like you abandoned this story or something, but I hope that's not true. It's soo good!!! I really want you to continue/finish it. PLEASE!!??
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 17 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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it's absolutely brilliant... I wish I could get emails to know when it was updated like on fanfiction, but I have it bookmarked so I can check back. please update quickly!!!
As for constructive criticism... As a writer myself, I find it is most helpful... But I can't think of anything offhand... All I can think of are questions that haven't been answered, and I have to assume that in time they will be... Who was the french guy in the beginning? Was that Snape? cuz that would be weird...
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 16 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Are you going to continue this?
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 12 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
| 16 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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... i feel bad for dudley. like, i know he was cruel and everything, but he's also only twelve years old. people can change if their raise changes.
After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
| 22 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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this was really good... i haven't checked on here in a while and it was a good surprise to see two chapters up and ready when i wasn't even sure there'd be one! only three more chapters or so? I can't tell if that's good or a disappointment, i have to admit. good because it means that I'll get to find out what happens and the next chapters will inevitably be exciting, but bad because it will be over. are you planning a sequel?
Author's Response: I'm glad you were able to take a moment to read :) Thank you for letting me know that you enjoyed my most recent chapters. I've got a vague idea for a sequel that would begin during the summer before Harry's third year, but it's very tentative. ;) I appreciate you asking, though. Thanks again for the review!
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
| 04 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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awesome chapter. i know it's a useless review to say that, but it really was awesome. please update soon... (and btw, I know what you mean about liking to write for hours. I wish I had the luxury)
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, I don't consider *any* review to be worthless. I don't really understand why authors get so tetchy if readers don't provide them with seveny-two paragraphs full of constructive criticism and ways to improve. I'm just glad ya like it :) And I appreciate that you took a moment to tell me so.
Title: Chapter 4: Whispers
| 21 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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this is a really good story but I have to comment upon your lack of basic english conventions- i.e. mechanics. grammar. whatever you want to call it. It could have some improvement. perhaps you might aquire a beta? I've never had one but they seem to help other people. Anyway, I love the story and hope you don't take it away or anything. just figured I'd mention the potential for improvement. that's one of the reason we writers write, right?
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