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This looks very interesting, there are a few minor grammor errors, but all in all it's very good! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Poor Harry! I want to cuddle him! You've done a very good job at presenting both Harry and Sev as believable characters! I can't wait to see what happens next! ~Frosty
Title: Chapter 9: The Use of Magic
| 17 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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This story is very interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next! Does your Snape have house elves?
Author's Response: Thank you - the next update shouldn't take too long! I don't think he will have House Elves, cute as they are, they're not very good for spies to have. I haven't mentioned it yet cos Snape thinks it's normal and Harry hasn't been out of his room yet. Thanks for reviewing!
Harry's secret is revealed. A new prophecy is told and Snape plays a crucial role to Harry's survival! Story takes place following the summer after GOF.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Aug 2009 / 19 Oct 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Defence
| 17 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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Just what has Lilly done? I Can't wait to find out!
Harry wants more than anything to be more like his father. In an attempt to change himself something goes wrong and he ends up in the care of his hated Potions Master. Can they form the bond Harry has longed for his whole life? This story is AU and will not be following canon.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Title: Chapter 2: To the Infirmary
| 20 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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this is a bit confusing, but good nontheless. What exactly were they attempting to brew?
Title: Chapter 1: A Conversation with Batman
| 07 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all... NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 13: Small Deeds
| 12 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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Aww, yay for Kallie! I absolutely love this story, I do a little dance every time you update! I can't wait for more! I wish Snape would just hug him and get it over with...but at this point that might give Harry a panic attack. Where has Malfoy been? Will he join the prank war? Sorry, I'll stop rambling now ^_-. I hope the must strikes again soon!
~Frosty
Author's Response: Thanks!! And I agree, go Kallie! _____Yeah, hugs might be a little while._____ Yeah I agree, Malfoy has to get back in the game, on either side. And the next chapter should be out TODAY, actually. :-)
Title: Chapter 14: Bad Blood and Bad Attitude
| 13 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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I love your Harry, but I find myself wishing for a blunt object to beat him over the head with sometimes. Poor Snape, he has his hands full! I hope everything will turn out alright between Harry and Blaise. I loved your inclusion of Percy in the prank war! Another well written chapter, can't wait for more! ~Frosty
Author's Response: :-) Glad you liked it!! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 15: A Dog, a Cat, a Harpy, a Bat, a Friend, and a Freak
| 21 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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Another chapter! Yay! Shakespeare is always fun, I know that one of your plays was Macbeth (crazy people are fun!), I'm not sure what the other one was.I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to seeing what happens next! ~Frosty
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your review!! The other play was Twelfth Night - my personal favorite. :0)
Title: Chapter 21: An Independent Evil
| 17 Nov 2009
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Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed)
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Oh yay! Another chapter, and just in time to distract me from my english paper! Poor Snape, he is always getting the rough end of the deal...I hope Harry eventually realizes how thick he has been! I can't wait to see what happens next! ~Frosty
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And I'll momentarily pretend to be sorry about your English paper...sorry. LOL everybody knows fanfiction is more worthwhile than school. (Or at least I better believe it, considering how much it interferes with MY work!) And yeah, Snape's life has never been the easiest. Some of that's his fault, but still...
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