Slytherin!
Response to Burned Hedwig Challenge... After blowing up his aunt, Harry's uncle abuses him farther than his mental capacity can stand. Even his cousin is concerned, and sends a letter by way of owl "To Whom It May Concern" pleading for his cousins sake for help. But Harry needs more than to be taken from his family. He needs to gain the will to live.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Keats
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2010 / 08 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Burnt Hedwig to the Rescue
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2010 / 08 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Burnt Hedwig to the Rescue
| Title: Chapter 3: Mistaken Conceptions | 07 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- Dudley is turning out to be a real great "big brother" and Sev strangely seems to like him. I noted that Sev says that he will take Harry to a hospital and then he will have to find Albus but will it not be dangerous for Harry to be at a public (wizard) hospital where anyone could get him unless Poppy is there during the summer. But it might be good so they could officially document all the abuse that Harry has suffered. Anyway I guess I will find out next chapter.
As a muggle born it should be no problem for Sev to take care of Dudley and it will be no different than a wizarding family who has a squib (which Dudley might be) and since Dudley also goes to a boarding school it should not be a problem when schools starts back. However Sev should get people like Mad Eye or Kingsley (aurors they trust) to arrest Vernon and Petunia and charge them otherwise Sev could be arrested for kidnapping Dudley.
Author's Response: Reviewers like you make my life more interesting. You bring up points which I hadn't necessarily thought of yet... and some that I had thought of, but I hadn't worried about as much. I appreciate it. Your advice makes it so that I will look at the story from all angles and make sure to address everything. The thing you mentioned about St Mungo's is a good thing to note- I had forgotten about the dangers, but one guy was killed by Devil's Snare at St. Mungo's, so I guess it's not completely out of the question. Thank you for reading, for reviewing, and especially for your thoughts. I do a lot of writing but until I discovered fanfiction nobody ever read my stuff so it was hard to improve. :))
When Fred & George stole the Marauder's Map in their first year, they didn't expect the secrets it would reveal years later. How will Harry & Snape adjust to the new discoveries & how will it effect the wizarding world? AU, canon through OoTP. SEVERITUS.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 18 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Jun 2011 / 11 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 18 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Jun 2011 / 11 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Defense Against the...Snape? | 11 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- As usual the Vernon is making a pig of himself (he did not need any help from Dobby) and Petunia is just awful but I think Dudley just like any teenager just wants to explore and have fun in a magical castle I mean what child wouldn't want to.
Snape and Harry both need time in a naughty corner LOL, but I'm sure they would soon become friends as Snape would not stand for any abuse of any child and with the Dursleys there he might have to protect Harry again and again, and Harry spending time with Snape might let him tolerate him more but as he protects Harry the boy would look to him more
In order to find Dudley all Harry has to do is take out his Map.
| Title: Chapter 8: Mischief Managed | 21 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- I just love those two and the Marauders really had a perfect test to find future Marauders. I am guessing that the reason the map is faltering is because it is sensing that Harry is not a Potter but a Snape (I bet Petunia knows more than she is letting on)
Author's Response: Thank you! The explanation of the flickering map and the start of the actual "Severitus" reveal will be coming up very soon! I've devised a unique reason for why Harry looks just like James, so I hope you will continue to enjoy this fic! There is something I really wanted to do with Petunia, but I'll have to see how it works logistically :)
Harry hears something interesting on Halloween night...
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jun 2008 / 11 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jun 2008 / 11 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Crescendo | 12 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- This was so beautiful, sniff sniff I love it, I keep hearing the song in my head while I read...just love that song one of my favs
Author's Response: Aaw, thanks Keats! I'm so glad you like it! And wow, it's beautiful? I'm so flattered! Thank you! And isn't the song great? One of my faves too: right up there with the theme song 'Phantom of the Opera'. Actually, that's what Snape was playing: 'Phantom'. You'll find out why next chapter.
Well, thanks again! You're the greatest!
Kisses and Coffee for reviewing!
-Elise
A summer road trip through Muggle America comes to a halt when the car that Ron, Hermione, and Harry have purchased breaks down. Walking to the nearest gas station, Harry encounters the last person he thought he ever wanted to see…and his 1987 Camaro. But there’s a side to Severus Snape that no one knows about: a free riding rebel that would rather don older rock tees than robes and still breaks rules wherever he can. Little do they know it, but the Golden Trio is in for one hell of a summer. - Summer after sixth Year - Non-HBP and DH compliant
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character, Profanity
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jul 2011 / 26 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jul 2011 / 26 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Gun, Roses, Beer, and Antics | 26 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- Love it so far, hope the trio spends their summer with this group I'm sure they would learn a lot...love this snape…sure Harry and the gang would love and trust this snape and his friends too…update soon
| Title: Chapter 3: Accidently on Purpose | 21 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- Oh God have Sev and the others save Harry before anything happens... if Harry uses his magic it could still be traced and the DE and MoMagic could find him...I don't want anything bad (rape) happen to him please
| Title: Chapter 4: No Sleep Till...Queens? | 02 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- I am so happy that Harry is OK, am sure he is very shaken but he is OK. The two boys Lonnie and Paul were great it shows that there are good samaritans out there and not all of them look like clean cut church going boys – what I like about it is that they asked for no reward or even recognition they did it because they realised that Harry was in trouble. For Harry it would reaffirm that there are good people /muggles out there – not only the two boys but the police as well. However it would also remind him to be cautious as there are also predators and bad people out there who don’t wear DE masks.
On that fateful night that Voldemort tried to kill Harry Potter, one man lost the object of his affections but gained a family member.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Mar 2010 / 02 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Mar 2010 / 02 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: The Loss of a Loved One | 03 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- love your first chapter looking forward to reading your story
| Title: Chapter 6: Owls and Magic | 07 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- I noted that Petunia actually expressed sorrow that the twins may die, which indicates that in some small way she does love them or at least have some positive emotional feelings for them. Love the fact that they got letters of acceptance from the other magical schools as well.
I hope that whoever comes to get them lets them buy extra clothes (normal every day wear), proper shoes, books of interest etc
Prequel to Never Again. After the death of her husband, Lily Potter must begin her life anew, along with her son, Harry. Can they find comfort and solace with Master Healer Severus Snape? Or will old wounds from past and present keep them apart?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Healer Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Hero's Farewell | 04 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: Keats (Signed) |
- I fitting tribute to James but I notice you did not hesitate to plug in a good word for Sev, making sure everyone knew that he is also a hero...looking forward to more
Author's Response: yeah, I couldn't resist letting everyone know that the Master Healer does more than just take care of patients. Actually all of them were heroes, because they all worked together to bring down Voldemort.