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Though at first reluctant, Snape agrees to go to fetch Harry Potter from his relatives' home. This plan of Dumbledore's goes well too....Snape ends up taking care of Harry, his most-hated enemy's son.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 04 Jun 2010 / 28 May 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Brats and Bats
| 31 May 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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This is one of my pet peeves when it comes to fanfiction. Doing this makes it look like you don't really care. When people see this kind of work, they assume that the author has not put time/effort into it, that it's not very good and avoid reading the story at all.
It would help a lot if you formated it by adding spaces. It'll make it a lot easier to read and much more attractive to the audience
You did better than me though, in some aspects. In my 1st fanfic, I had 3 grammar mistakes in the 1st 3 lines, and really silly mistakes too.
Best of luck with your fic
Author's Response: I have increased the spaces, as u will see when u open the text one more time.
Title: Chapter 1: Brats and Bats
| 01 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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wow, now it looks like a poem. Are you using wordpad or notepad or something? I hate those, they never format right
Author's Response: Yes, I am using notepad bcoz HTML script takes a hell lot of time. And also it is my first time thta I submitted stories newhere. And I c that u surf this story pretty often! And I'm a bit new to all this, as I have just sai. Read my bio, will u??
Sequel to Of Trolls and Wizard Kids. Severus and Harry are father and son and begin the summer before second year. They will face several challenges to their relationship but keep on being there for each other.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 08 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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aw, poor lads. Will we be seeing Sirius anytime soon?
Eleven year old Harry Potter is not the boy everyone expects him to be. Unpopular, picked on, and unable to perform magic correctly most of the time because of a stutter, Harry is the boy nobody wants to be around. What happens when Severus Snape, the Potions Master currently spear heading the anti-Potter party, gets a glimpse of the boy’s true personality and inner workings?
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 7: Stowaway
| 22 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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wow, i love the quick updates. thank you. So harry will spend christmas at Snape's, wow, lots of time to get to know eachother better. Will snape get harry something for christmas? Or vice versa?
Title: Chapter 5: A Spell Gone Right
| 22 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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yay, Harry's finally done it! And he's finally starting to fit in
Title: Chapter 8: Christmas
| 23 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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what a wonderful christmas! Looking forward to hogwarts again. Will draco cause more trouble for harry?
Title: Chapter 9: Hogwarts
| 24 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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Good chapter. harry is one happy little boy, hope it remains that way.
I always enjoy scenarios where there is misunderstanding between harry and snape - whether it be snape thinks harry is the culprit of a misdeed or harry not understanding something snape says
Title: Chapter 10: Duality
| 26 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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LOVE IT VERY MUCH! The conflict was great and the resolution was even greater!
Harry writes a letter to Severus trying to express how grateful he is that Severus adopted him and gave him a home and family. Just a little fic I wrote for Father's Day, inspired by hpfanficfan's request for a Snape & Harry Father's Day fic. Set in the Broken Wings universe.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 21 Jun 2010 / 21 Jun 2010
Series: Broken Wings
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 21 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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Wow, that was quick. Love it! It's so mushy. Better late than never, Harry! I love how his letter conveyed so much is so few words
Title: Chapter 3: Disputations
| 27 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed)
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um...ouch?
Author's Response: I know right, lol :)
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