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After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior.

There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: The House Which Time Forgot - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Close 02 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    I loved it! It's so neat that we get to start seeing the inner workings of Snape's mind. I like how Harry feels secure when Snape spanks him-- that's interesting. It's easy to see how they can need one another.

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Alone 25 Jan 2009
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    I love it! Poor Harry is so conflicted. He doesn't want to get punished but he wants the love and attention he gets afterwords.

    All I could think while I read it was "This kid will be the death of me :)"

Snape punishes Harry for the debacle at the Shrieking Shack, and gets far more than he bargained for.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Mar 2009 / 18 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: After the Shrieking Shack 20 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    Thank you so much to everyone who reviewed.

    I am an American. If anyone spots any glaringly obvious Americanisms, please let me know.

AU one-shot about Harry’s first detention with Snape. Take one mistreated boy, one misinformed man, mix well and watch what happens!

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Aug 2008 / 03 Aug 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Harry's First Detention 03 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    Very good. I like the balance between abused Harry and defiant Harry. Snape is nicely IC as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I find the challenge of keeping everyone in character while still in an AU is the hardest part! Thanks for letting me know I'm managing (so far). :)

When Harry dies as an old man, his hated childhood professor is the one who comes to take him to the after-life. Can the unlikely pair finally understand each other in death? And what if they're not actually dead?

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Jun 2011 / 14 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Boat 14 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    Adorable! Snape is so IC, and Harry does seem sort of eleven.

It wasn't that hard. Write an essay about what he had done wrong- surely Potter could not fail at something so simple.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Jan 2009 / 10 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Off Topic 10 Jan 2009
Reviewer: Mourning becomes Elektra (Signed)
    That was gut wrenching. Well done, in character but man oh man.... Excellent job.

    Author's Response:

    If I managed to even partialy convey the horror of the subject, then I consider the fic a sucess. You're the first person to tell me my work's gut wrenching... thanks.

    And thanks for the review,

    Song


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