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Through a Glass, Darkly by Sita Z starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor 19 Jul 2011
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    Sequel? Please? I always want my favorite stories to last forever ... so be a nice Scheherazade and continue on and on and on...

Trading In My Ashes by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
What happens when Harry really is as naughty as Snape thinks he is? Why is Harry acting this way and what will the staff do about it? In particular, what will Harry do when he finds out all of his detentions are now being assigned solely to Professor Snape? In response to the ‘Bad Harry’ challenge.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Elf!Harry, Elves, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry, SuperPower! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 May 2013 / 10 Oct 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Bad Harry
Title: Trading In My Ashes 04 May 2013
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    I am enjoying the story, it's good that everything didn't get resolved in the first chapter or two - I think that is a little more realistic, though not as easy to write.

How We Fall by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 261]
After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Drug use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jul 2015 / 26 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
Title: Chapter 2: What They Sent You 26 Feb 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    An excellent start. I've enjoyed your stories, hope you continue with this one.

Out Of The Mist by chrmisha starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
What if Harry hadn't chosen to return to the final battle after he "died"? What if he'd chosen to return to a different time altogether in hopes of making a difference?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2012 / 24 Mar 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 04 May 2013
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    This is an excellent start - hope you continue

The Day he was Pushed too Far by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Unable to deal with the pain and loss he felt during the third task; Harry slowly startes to fall apart,the others around him oblivious to it all. The loneliness continues to eat him up until one day, Harry finally snaps. Who will be there save him now and help him pick up the pieces?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 38 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2014 / 11 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Pushed Too Far
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 20 May 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    Wow, just ... wow. Very intense story, but you've made it quite plausible. If Harry had been just a bit less stubborn or had not had Ron to support him at least a little in the dorm, something like this was possible.

    Author's Response: Of course even the most put together person cant do everything alone...

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 20 May 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    Brilliant, glad you had them all rally around Harry, no matter how belated it might be.

    Author's Response: Cool thanks, and yea I know, they're starting to come together...which is important for future chapters...

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Sticks and Stones 21 May 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    Doesn't think of him as a weapon? Maybe not consciously - or at least doesn't acknowledge it to himself ... but all his decisions are based on Harry's future in confronting Voldemort for him and the rest of the wizarding world - no decisions are made that don't keep that in mind - or he'd have Harry packed off somewhere safe instead of being in the eye of the storm.

    Like your story, though even though Albus aggravates me (as usual). Are you going to have Harry mull things over while unconscious? I always enjoy having Harry do a heart to heart with his parents, when its done right.

    I was a little disappointsed that Ron or his other dorm mates weren't on Harry's "list". I would have taken their betrayal much worse, though perhaps Harry decided "he deserved it, or didn't 'deserve' loyalty". Anyhow - good work, hope you update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Your right, Albus I have a love/hate relationship with him. How could someone so smart not be aware of something so small( I mean in Canon..Harry was neglected at the least) Anyways before I get off topic lol

    Not at the moment, I like it when it does right as well, but Harry isnt in the "im ok' stage yet. Hes in the "why cant I just die' phase you know? He wouldnt listen to them if they spoke to him, those Severus had saved him he got him when he was really vunerable and yearning for someone to care. Does that make any sense?

    He has actually, he loved Ron like abrother and Hermione like a sister, but he doesnt want them dead. He took theur betrayal the worse, he was just hiding it inside...like when he snapped at Hermione..

     I'm glad you liked it, and I will


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Can you handle it? 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    Sigh - i would have thought Draco wasn't quite so dense ... or at least that he would keep his mouth shut for a bit.

    Will voldemort show himself now that Harry is 'gone'? It will be fun to watch the wizarding world realize they just drove their only hope to suicide.

    Hope they lynch Rita Skeeter and the other reporters.

    And I'm curious as to how the Dursleys will react - will Petunia be hit hard, losing her sister's son, even if she always maintained an emotional distance? Will Dudley suddenly realize that Harry wasn't a waste of space? Will Vernon express any regrets, at all?

    Author's Response:

    The dark lord will make an apperance...I just need to get everyone across first, since he's not that important to this story, but hes in there lol

     The dursely reaction will be another...just wait is all lol...Idk yet,  havent written that chapter yet

     Draco is in denial though, he will come around slowly.


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: You don't Understand 06 Jun 2012
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    *sigh* Sirius is always so very strident in what he says - and never realizes that words are weapsons as deadly as bullets. After all, that is partly what drove Harry to this extreme in the first place - along with feeling abandoned.

    Perhaps this will bring Sev and Harry closer ... hope Harry learns to rely on him.

    I do envy you the near daily updates - I'm lucky if I manage one or two a month.

Field of Broken Dreams by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
After getting sixteen year old Harry out of jail over the summer, Severus Snape must deal with a number of things, including: trying to maintain a relationship with his future wife, building a relationship with his future step-son, and trying to figure out the ever-changing enigma that is Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jun 2021 / 06 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: So Much More 07 Apr 2013
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
    really enjoying this, especially since Snape is not changing right away and Harry is taking more than a chapter or two to heal.


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