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Twonky [Contact] Better be Ravenclaw!
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I'm a sucker for Daddy Severus stories. I'm also a teacher. I have two beautiful, but troubled daughters. (They make me wonder how Harry could have survived his childhood without developing Reactive Attachment Disorder, but he was loved and cared for during his first 15 months. My girls didn't have that.) We have three crazy cats. One was named Severus before we found out that she's a girl! Also, I recently discovered that my patronus is a mole. [Report This]
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Reviews by Twonky

Past Featured Story To Trust by Abie starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Harry Potter is located in London in the dead of night. How exactly did he end up there, and what has he been doing? Well, any kid with half a brain knows not to talk to strangers.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Mar 2015 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: To Trust - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Good Instincts? 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Fabulous. I love the lack of information. It leaves me wanting to read more.

Title: Chapter 3: Too Good to be True 21 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    I love the way Harry thinks. Great job. I'm hungry for more.

Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads by sshpfanfiction starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Over Christmas break, Harry and Snape are attacked by a Ghangzou, a rare, magical genie that shows its victims what life would be like if one thing changed.

What they see will alter their relationship forever, if they'll let it.

(Originally meant for the Christmas challenge, but it sort of took on a life of its own)

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 May 2014 / 03 Apr 2014
Series: May All Your Christmas' Be White - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: If Only in My Dreams 09 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Wow!
    I wonder if they are having the same "dream." I hope so.

Title: Chapter 5: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    This is really great, heart-wrenching, but great.

Title: Chapter 7: You Only Can Heal By Living 16 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Hey,
    I think you did a really good job at portraying how Snape would feel about losing his father.
    Twonky

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Twonky! Definitely was unsettling for him. Keep me updated on what your thinking as the story goes on!


Title: Chapter 15: The Beginning 04 May 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    I loved it. (Except for the fact that tears are pouring down my face and my nose is running.)

To Be Remembered For My Sins by Lillielle starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Disclaimer: I own nothing. AU. Voldemort's dead. Harry's losing it. No one's noticed a thing...except a certain Potions Professor. (Suicide themes and self harm warning.)

Takes Place: 4th Year, 5th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Jul 2014 / 10 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 19 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Hey! That was a mean place to stop. I know, you should leave us wanting more, and I do.

Adumbration by SnowWhiteOwl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
After a horrible summer, Harry starts his third year and is confronted with Dementors. The green light, the maniac laughter – but there is more. Death Eaters, torture - what happened after Voldemort attacked, before he was placed with his relatives? Harry tries to find out, not knowing that the trauma might break him. Child abuse, rape, Harry&Snape mentor/guardian

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Amnesia, Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Sep 2014 / 11 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: The Boggart 22 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Wow! That's all I can think of right now.

The Light In The Darkness by Roselina4389 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 113]
When Dumbledore sees the welts upon Harry Potter, he removes him from his relative's care at once. His guardian for the summer is none other than Severus Snape. It is an unhappy arrangement-Snape is snarky and snide, making Harry do chores and never keeping him happy. But Harry realises that Snape is not as he seems. In fact, he is just what Harry had needed all along-a support. Warning: CP!

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Aug 2015 / 17 Jul 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Slight Tenderness 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Hey!
    I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying your story very much. I think you are doing great with Snape's personality and Harry's too. I read through your reviews because you seem so upset at people disliking Snape, but they didn't seem negative to me. I know that as the author, you are always very sensitive. (At least I am.) Keep up the good work and ignore the person who told you to use the word "preform" for do. First of all it's "perform" not "preform". Secondly, I think Snape is precise, but not deliberately wordy or flowery. Some people try to hard to use "big" words and make him sound ridiculous.
    I look forward to more,
    Twonky

    Author's Response: Thank you.

Title: Chapter 5: The Photo 26 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
    Oh, I beg to different. People can rate a chapter low for any reason they want. They shouldn't, but they will.

    PS Read my other review. It tells you what I think.

    Author's Response: I was checking the rating of my chapters and saw that some of them were low and the only reason was because Snape was too "mean". I got a little frustrated as I'm trying to put him in CHARACTER. I don't mind so much now but I'm still new, and I don't want people to not read my story because it's got a low rating


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