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| JAWorley [Contact]
| Better be Gryffindor!
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| Member since: 03 Aug 2008
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In which Dumbledore has been reading far too many books on Muggle psychology and Snape's desire to strangle his employer reaches dangerous levels. Locked in a classroom with his hated professor until the two can reach an “understanding,” Harry despairs that he is going to be murdered and turned into potions ingredients.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 10 Dec 2011 / 10 Dec 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Feeling for Understanding
| 11 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Nice. I could totally see this going farther though, maybe with Harry needing to get out of the castle and he goes out at night to find Snape staring at the stars and Snape talks to him again? I could totally see Harry anonymously giving Snape a bunch of Muggle Pens too.
Author's Response: Haha I could totally see that too. My muse latched onto that idea, so you just might see that story around sometime soon! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Title: Chapter 1: The Snow Globe
| 25 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Interesting concept!
Author's Response: Just wait 'til you see what happens next! Hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
Title: Chapter 3: The Castle
| 25 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Beam me up Scotty! Love it!
Author's Response: Ha! I can't claim originality for that line (!), but I thought it was perfect for the situation! My biggest challenge was figuring out the LOGIC that led up to Harry shouting, "Beam me out, Scotty!" (Spock would have said there was little logic at all...!)
Title: Chapter 4: Christmas
| 25 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I really did enjoy this story. It was perfect in every way! Love the ending!
Author's Response: Thank you so very very much! I don't have a broad background in reading fantasy fiction, so I hoped my imagination hadn't gone awry when I got hit with this idea! I'm so pleased that you loved the story, and thank you so much for the reviews! :-D Joy to the world!
Title: Chapter 1: Truths
| 25 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks
A young Harry Potter discovers he can change his appearance at will and, having had enough of life at number four Privet Drive, decides to live life as Alex Matthews. But how long before Harry Potter's destiny catches up to Alex?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 5
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Completed: No
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Updated: 31 Dec 2011 / 26 Dec 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Details
| 01 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Interesting idea. I do hope at some point to see Harry again... perhaps dealing with who he is.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 05 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 05 Jan 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: A Startling Discovery
| 04 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I think you have a good start, but some of the things in this chapter could use a little more development so that they don't feel rushed. Sometimes it is worth an extra sentence here or there to explain things to the reader more in-depth. I like your writing style though and you're doing good!
Title: Chapter 5: Lent Day Four
| 26 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I like this so far. The only thing I can see that needs working on is your use of past and present tense. A lot of times for instance you use the word 'sat' instead of 'sitting'.
Or you said, "He got given," instead of, "He was given." Sometimes it helps to read it out loud to see if it sounds right, because our ears will pick things up that our eyes don't while reading through something. Just a thought.
Keep up the good work!
P.S. I can beta for a few chapters if you want. Just drop me an e-mail.
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