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Title: Chapter 11: Countercurse
| 20 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Loved the detention!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was kind of hard coming up with something that's never been done before.
Title: Chapter 13: All He Ever Wanted
| 23 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Great chapter. But you had them Apparating directly from the infirmary to St. Mungo's which isn't possible with the wards. You should've had them floo OR actually leaving Hogwarts before apparating. Don't mean to nitpick, just be mindful of your story details. Update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, you're right, don't know what I was thinking. Thanks for the tip and I'll go fix it. Glad you're enjoying this!
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Orphan
Rated:
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 0
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Jan 1970 / 01 Jan 1970
Series: The Darkness Within
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Curse Away
| 24 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Poor Sev. I love how this story is going.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 16 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Poor Harry. I hope he starts comng out of his shell soon.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 08 May 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Poor Harry. At his current age & size, the house elves are as big as he is.
With the Dursleys away Harry is left needing a place to stay and the most unlikely candidate steps forward. A Harry and Snape guardian fic. Please read and review!
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 6
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Completed: No
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Updated: 17 Apr 2009 / 04 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 21 Sep 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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What crawled up Snape's ass and died? Is he having a wizard's form of PMS? Is he trying to get a gold star in assholedom?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! LOL, three questions which often ran through my mind while reading the HP books lol. I promise he will get better though, in a while anyway. I hope to get the next chapter up tonight! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 17 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Harry is crazy. I realize he empathizes with the girl, but SHE IS A STRANGER. Harry is an idiot for not telling Snape about her.
Author's Response: Harry is a bit of an idiot but he's trying to do what's right, Snape isn't going to be happy though...
"...I am not your father. I will not act like your father. I do not care for you, Potter, and I will not be a parent to you..." ...Harry was more than ready to agree with that and nodded as he finished the drink he had been sipping at nervously. It has been often said that a father and son can overcome anything, that family can overcome anything as long as there is love between them...but what if there isn't love but only hate? In a time of war most rely on their family and friends, but who can Harry rely on when he can't tell his friends that Severus Snape is his father? Especially with how curious they are of his secrets already. It isn't like he has Snape, anyway...to Snape he isn't more than just a burden after all, right? So in his time of need who can Harry turn to? Who can help him as he completes the task that was set on him?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 18
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Completed: No
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Updated: 13 Aug 2009 / 18 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: A Letter
| 04 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Did you forget to format this chapter? Or did something screw up when it was uploaded?
Author's Response: Something screwed up when I put it up. I think it might have happened because earlier I had some trouble with the document...so I'm hoping that it didn't make the entire story like this and that I have to go back and put spaces between every paragraph...that would be terrible tedious...anyhow I have fixed it and it should be easier to read now...thank you for the review and informing me of the slight problem...
Title: Chapter 5: "I have a bed here" III
| 20 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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Draco is a prat. And since Harry wasn't sitting with anyone else on the train, he never met Ron or Hermione. I see a very lonely school stay for Harry.
Summer after fourth year is finally over, and things are not as expected when Harry makes it back to the magical world. Badly broken and determined for it to stop, Harry turns to, surprisingly, a certain Potions Master, who in turn finds within himself, of all places, a heart still beating and waiting to love, and be loved in turn.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 35
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Completed: No
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Updated: 27 May 2013 / 23 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 02 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed)
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vampire butterflies? What is Draco on?
No... wait... WHAT WERE YOU DRINKING ON NEW YEAR'S EVE??
and why didn't you share?
Author's Response: LOL!!! I had nothing to drink, love, on new years eve nor when I was writing this chapter. I have no idea where this came from. It just did. I ope this means you liked it!! Thanks so much for the comment!!
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