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Harry becomes Severus' charge during the Christmas break during 2nd year. Will Harry be able to survive his new overprotective guardian? This story may contain mild spanking but is not a main part of the story

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Dec 2007 / 26 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 01 Jun 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    come on update and I'll love ya forever, its a great start but I wanna know what happens next!!!

A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 10 Mar 2011
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    Your portrail of england isn't bad at all, very good indeed for someone who has never been here, I don't know anything about bowcastle, I've never heard of the place, but it sounds like English countryside to me. The "cafe" that they went to sounds alot like a pub to me though, for the simple reason that I have never been to a cafe that served fish and chips. Pubs build their reputations on the quality of their beer and their food. Pubs are where you go if you want a hearty meal, good and simple with no dainty sized portions!!!! I love pub food!!!!

    I have followed this story from the start, and I still look forward to every new chapter! Brilliant plot, and your Severus is one of the best on p&s!!!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  That means a lot to me.  Yeah, the cafe would be better described as a pub, wouldn't it?  I really appreciate your kind comments!  It's hard sometimes with a long story to feel that you're keeping the quality up.  I'm so glad you still like it. 

Response to Burned Hedwig Challenge... After blowing up his aunt, Harry's uncle abuses him farther than his mental capacity can stand. Even his cousin is concerned, and sends a letter by way of owl "To Whom It May Concern" pleading for his cousins sake for help. But Harry needs more than to be taken from his family. He needs to gain the will to live.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2010 / 08 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Burnt Hedwig to the Rescue
Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch Fanatics 20 Feb 2010
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    bangs!!!! bloody BANGS!!!! I love the story, I honestly do, but BANGS!!! the first time I read that in a fanfiction I had to google it! I thought it was something to do with sex!!! why is it that every time I get into a fanfiction I get jolted out of the moment by a word like, trash, or bangs, or a phrase like "making out" (what does that mean anyway? is it like snogging or is it something else?) RANT OVER. sorry. it just bugs me is all. if I were wrighting an american based fanfiction I would probs have a bit of difficulty too. we call it a fringe in England. I love this story, its really well written and I cant wait for the next chapter. I hope you're not too annoyed at me for my rant, I just needed to get it out of my system. strawberry lolly pops to you if you get the next chappie up soon. LOL

    Author's Response:

    haha.  No worries.  I guess it's pretty obvious I'm not Brittish--I'm from Maine (USA).  I'll try to remember to use the word fringe in the future--I didn't actually know that was a Brit thing.  I had noticed that people used that word, but as unfamiliar as bangs was to you when you first read it, that's how I felt about the word "fringe".  To me, fringe ought to have something to do with fabric.  It seems weird to use that to describe hair.  I'll adjust though :p.  I'll try to remember to edit that out of this chappie in a bit.  I actually thank you for commenting on that--too many people let the britishisms go when that's one of the things I need to get a handle on to make my fics seem believable.

     As for making out, I haven't any idea if it's like snogging.  I've never used that word in my life, and I've only really heard it once on an episode of Gilmore Girls.  It means kissing or something, right?  Making out, as far as I can tell (I've only had one serious boyfriend, so maybe it has a technical meaning) is... kissing for a really long time.  Like, when you need to come up for air after.  But... they don't use that term in Britain either?  I wouldn't have known that.  Of course, it took me forever to learn that "garden" means yard to you guys.  I kept imagining little Harry running through Snapes flowers or something and I was like "how is he not getting in trouble for this?".  Haha. 

     Thanks for the review!  Will try to have another chapter up soonish, but you can never tell with me. 

     ~Cait


After destroying Dumbledore's office, Harry wakes to find himself in the past as an eight year old boy and unable to return to his own time...

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2008 / 16 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Past 07 Jun 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    brilliant start..... now all you have to do is update a few times and bobs yer uncle, brilliant story!!!

At the beginning of second year, Severus agrees to become Harry's guardian, little suspecting the far-reaching effects of this decision.

(Note: The story was also published - in pieces - on Fan Fiction Net, under the titles "Finding a Family", "Losing a Book", "Adding One More", "Sharing a Family", "Saving a Friend", and "Finding a Home".)

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Sep 2008 / 14 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 06 Jun 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    when I was eight me and my mum made shortbread biscuits, only we forgot to grease the paper and it stuck to the biscuits. I (being eight) decided to eat them anyway. The very thought of shortbread now makes me feel quite ill. this story is wonderfull, everyone is in charicter, (exept prehaps snape, who is, in my oppinion, as in charicter as it possable for him to be while giving harry cuddles!!!!) OK on to the next chapter!!!!

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 06 Jun 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh are you doing a sequal???

A summer trapped with Snape seemed the ultimate torture, but when Harry begins to trust his enemy, a terrible betrayal sends him spiraling into desperation. Will he have the strength to survive? Not canon. Mentions abuse. Takes place after 2nd year.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 26 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Feb 2011 / 10 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: The Light in the Dark 15 May 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    I love this story, you get the emotions just right. update again soon

Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...

NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Unpleasant Encounters 28 May 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    if this isn't tooooo much of a clifie then I would hate to know what is, lol, (and know that isn't a challenge) loveing the story by the way!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I totally should've left it when Snape rushed out to find him, instead of when Harry woke up. Then you'd've REALLY wanted to murder me. :-)

Title: Chapter 19: Slythindors 20 Aug 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    I'm sorry. I'm soooo sorry, I was loveing the story and then near the end I was jurked out of the story by one word. one anoying, word. my pet hate; you called it a blooming samosa, it seems petty I know but please please pleeeease would you call it a term, in england we have three terms a year with a half term holiday in the middle of each one, (allthough they dont seem to have them at hogwarts, at bording schools they useualy have a visiting day on half term and the childrens familys can take them out to places.) I dont suppose you could tell me how semesters work where you are, (I would like to assume someplace in america but I could be wrong) I love this story and I am impressed with the way you are progressing the charicters and there relationships wiht each other. I am eagaly awaiting your next chapter.

    yours

    Mica

    Author's Response: LOL no problem - I fixed it. I totally understand your difficulty - word choice is a real big one for me, too, so I totally appreciate your comment. The term 'semester' was most natural to me, because Hogwarts' term schedule is quite similar to the college semester system in the US - we (generally)have 2 semesters - fall and spring - with long breaks on either side - winter and summer. We also have shorter breaks in between for things like Thanksgiving. For example, my school's (Swarthmore's) fall term starts in September and goes until mid-December, and spring term starts in mid-January and goes until late May. We therefore get a month off at Xmas and 3 months off in the summer. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and hope you continue to enjoy as I go along. :-)

My take on what would really happen should Snape have to take care of Harry over the summer. Includes lots of mean Snape, angsty Harry and last but not least...spanking!

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jun 2009 / 08 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Yes Sir 12 Jun 2009
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed)
    please gimme a sequal (oh merlin I cant spell) This is realy well writen and a lot more likly then some of the senareos I have read about recently!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! The only problem with a sequel is, it would probably involve a lot of fluff, and I  like my Snape to be the mean bastard he is...


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