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After the final battle, Harry goes back into Snape's memories. What he finds, shocks him and turns what should have been his happiest days, into a living hell.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kodak717
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jan 2012 / 27 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Post-DH Sevitus
| Title: Chapter 11: Overindulgence | 29 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- This is such a well-written fic. I like the connection you're developing between Snape and Harry... it's very believable. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying to make the relationship develop at a believable time-frame. It wouldn't do, to have Harry and Snape best buddies right away. It's more believable to have them struggle for awhile. They are two hard-headed guys as well; they are not going to see eye-to-eye all the time, even when their relationship does improve.
Thanks for taking the time to review.
| Title: Chapter 12: Safe Haven | 19 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- Nice chapter. Can't wait to see how the dark magic thing works out...
Author's Response: Thank you. It's all a little complicated, but if anyone can figure it out, it Severus.
| Title: Chapter 13: Sudden Clarity | 21 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- I like Snape's regret over lost opportunities with Harry. Very human. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think that it's beginning to hit Snape just how much he's missed with his son, and hopefully he'll realise that it's not too late to get to know his son.
| Title: Chapter 16: One Step Forward...Two Backwards | 06 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- Oh, what a cliff! Love it. :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you. Sorry about the cliffie! I'll try to update soon. ;)
| Title: Chapter 17: Raw Emotions | 03 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- Another great chapter! Severus did a good job diffusing the situation with Harry - you wrote it very well. :)
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you very much. Yeah, Snape's beginning to learn what it is to be a father.
| Title: Chapter 18: Slow Road to Recovery | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- I like the way you've approached Harry and Ginny's relationship. Normally, I don't gravitate towards fics that focus heavily on the shipping aspect of relationships, but you've done a really nice job keeping it believable without overpowering the story behind Harry and Severus. Good job.
And sorry for not reviewing in so long. I've been away from fanfic-land for a number of weeks now. It feels good to be back reading again. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I've tried to have their relationship as a background story, but this is not a romance story so I'm trying to keep it balanced so that the main focus is Harry and Sev's relationship.
Oh that's okay. I appreciate you taking the time to review. 'That's really sweet, and I'm happy to have you back!
That is such a coinquidink, because I was just thinking yesterday how much I miss YOUR story, "Father of MIne". Any chances of an update soon?
| Title: Chapter 19: Count Down to D-Day | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- oh my! oh my oh my oh my...
Author's Response:
Hmm....what are you thinking. Nervous, are we?
LOL!! So good to have you back. I want to read your story though. I'm so anxious. You left us on a bit of a cliffie!
| Title: Chapter 20: A Rose by Any Other Name | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- Snort... at least he didn't get Severus' nose.
My favorite line in this is, "If he had done nothing else right with his life, he at least could be proud of having sired this incredibility talented, handsome young man." Not sure why it struck a chord, but maybe it's b/c it shows humility on Severus' part. Nice writing, as usual!
oh, and thanks for the hat-tip at the beginning of the chapter. that was very nice... just sorry i've been such a poor reviewer lately! :)
Author's Response:
To be honest with you, I almost did it! I was arguing with my two voices, you know the little Angel on one shoulder and the little Devil on the other, and the Angel won for this one. I thought that Harry had enough to deal with already. I had to give the poor kid a break.
Oh thank you. Yeah, Severus is very proud of Harry. Ooops did I spell incredibily wrong? Or did you? Yikes, better go back and check! Yeah, Snape knows that he is not a nice person, buthe recognises that Harry IS and he's proud that his son is so much like Lily yet has grown into his own person as well.
Again, I'm pleased as punch that you're back, and you're making me blush at your kind words. :)
| Title: Chapter 21: Should Smell As Sweet | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- The Severus hair thing was very funny. I could just picture Minerva's pinched bun-too-tight face. Nice levity, and can't wait to see what happens at the party...
Author's Response:
Thanks! I enjoyed writing this chapter I think the most out of all of them. I
Hmm...the party! Oh Harry, will you never learn? But I think the party scene should be fun to write too! LOL!
| Title: Chapter 23: Through the Fog | 09 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) |
- ah, good job, Severus. What a tough spot for a parent to be in. The scene ith McCleggan was funny. And, of course, very nice writing. But that goes without saying :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, not an easy situation to deal with, and I thought that Severus handled it surprisingly well considering his lack of experience as a father. Oh, I'm glad that you liked that scene, even though I took it from the movie.
Thank you Kodak.