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Title: Chapter 16: Sing, Muse
| 07 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Ach, you're chapter made me want to read the start of the Illiad again, but I can't find the book anywhere! Anyway, great chapter - I could easily picture Snape reading Harry to sleep here, and he would have such a wonderful reading voice too... If only the fan girls could corner him and make him do an audio-tape! I liked how you made Harry rather hyper after his nightmare and how Snape put him in his place and wouldn't let him turn night into day!
Title: Chapter 12: Grisly, Mysterious Fate
| 09 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Yay, you updated! I loved the pixie attack and especially the way Snape just sat back and pretended not to notice - I could so imagine that! You awesome writer you, this just keeps getting better and better each chapter, please keep them coming! Don't forget to save some butterbeer for yourself!
Title: Chapter 26: A Firm Hand
| 07 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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heh, loved it! I still reckon Wraith should have eaten Ripper, though!
Author's Response: Well, maybe he would've if he was a real snow leopard, haha!
Title: Chapter 1: Breaking Bread
| 05 Feb 2009
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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I don't think your characters were at all OOC and it made for a very enjoyable read - to me, all the scenes made sense and I loved the way Harry slowly helped nurse Snape back to health: it was very unobtrusive and all the more believable because of that. Stories like this are my favourite vulnerable!Snape always brings out my protective tendencies - a great read, keep writing :)
Title: Chapter 9: A Goddess's Warning
| 20 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Very good chapter; worth the wait. I always love it when something magical and mysterious enters these stories, and Nyx is spot on - not over the top at all! I hope you update soon, Selene is so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it was worth the wait. I can't believe how hard this chapter was to write. I'll try and update soon but school is really taking up alot of my time. So no promises. Thanks again for your review!
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 24 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Yep - definitely worth it! Little Harry is so cute! I like how Severus dealt with Harry when he ran away, and the water fight was fun to read. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like how Severus dealt. I don't want him to be too lenient because 1) that doesn't seem Severus-ish and 2) it wouldn't help Harry, in the long run... At the same time, Harry is damaged and does needed to be treated w/ caution.
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 26 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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I love Dusty! It's so rarely that people write an original House Elf, and his different way of speaking is brilliant! Harry was cute and the fight with the socks was done very well. The ending to the chapter was fine, but now I'm curious as to what's going to happen next...
With the Dursleys away Harry is left needing a place to stay and the most unlikely candidate steps forward. A Harry and Snape guardian fic. Please read and review!
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 6
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Completed: No
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Updated: 17 Apr 2009 / 04 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 30 Sep 2008
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Dun dun dah! What an ending! I liked Snape getting all twitchy because Harry isn't behaving as expected, but it was mean of him 2 confiscate most of Harry's stuff, at least he doesn't know about the special box from the Weasleys...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it! The ending! I did enjoy writing that! Snape was twitchy... and mean. But he didn't get the special box and that's good! Good O' Weasleys! Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 25 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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eep! Exciting, I wonder what will happen next... I like it how your Snape and Harry interact - Snape is always so determined to see the worst in Harry, and Harry's determined to prove him wrong! I'm really looking forward to whenever your next chapter is out!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! I have written some of the next chapter and it should be out early next week. I'm so glad you are enjoying this fic! It is still so unbelievable that people out there are actually reading my fic, let alone enjoying it! Reviews encourage me so much, thanks again!
Title: Chapter 5: "I have a bed here" III
| 20 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed)
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Chapters that are already written? heh, I do that too! I'm really really happy about the double whammy you've just posted; they're really great chapters, quite deep and really move the plotline forward in a very promising way. I'm hoping Harry gets more spunky later on, as that would be fun, but your Harry at the moment is really cute, so either way would be enjoyable. Good luck with those chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you! =) More spunky? Meh, I'm such a lousy judge of character... He grows up! That much I know ;) Can't stay a kid forver, now can he?
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