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Title: Chapter 4: Snapshot Four - Would You Sir?
| 12 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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More, soon??? Please!? I like your writing, keep at it.
Title: Chapter 24: An Absolutely Awful Day
| 18 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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Intense!!! I loved this chapter. Harry did deserve that spanking! The emotion is so raw, it makes the story all the better to read, keep going, I love your work.
Author's Response: He did indeed, the little imp! This was an intense chapter and it'll get even more emotional later on. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral
| 26 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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Oh, my god. So emotional, books, and movies never bring tears to my eyes. But this one did. I can't even imagine. I love it! Part of me wants to stop reading, and pretend everything will be ok for them. But the other part of me keeps reading, wanting to feel the emotion that this story brings out. Good job! I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks, i feel like I'm watching Titanic, writing this, and the ship is sinking and everyone is dying. Morbid, huh? Part of me wants to stop writing because I know how it ends, but I can't do that, and this will be finished, but God I feel like I'm writing a Nicholas Sparks novel.
Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral
| 26 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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It does have some similarites to the feeling of the titanic. I can imagine how hard it is to write. Have you ever considered writing, something origional. You could do it, I think. Like I said books and movies never provoke so much emotion from me as this story does.
Author's Response: I have written several original novels, but none as sad as this one. I'm currently looking for an agent to publish them. I do have one posted on fictioncentral .net under the penname Sevswife, Magician of Asgard, it's a retelling about Loki, Norse god of Mischief. You can check it out if you'd like.
Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral
| 26 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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I will do that for sure. I love your work. It's great, very captivating.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I hope you enjoy it! it's one of my favorites!
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Slytherinophobia
| 25 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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This is an amazing stort, and the plot line is great. You write well and I really enjoyed reading this fic. Will you be continuing this fic.? I really hope so, I would love to keep reading this fic.
Title: Chapter 46: Tying Up Loose Ends
| 17 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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This was a great story!!! Are you planning a sequal??? I hope so!! I love the way you write!
Author's Response: Thanks very much and yes, I am making plans for one. But I need to finish up my other fic, Where Shadows Go, it's in a very different AU, where Severus is a Healer and Harry has been raised by him since he was two. You can check out the other stories in that series while you're waiting.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: So It Begins.....
| 20 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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Great beginning! I will deffinently keep reading if you keep writing! Great job!
Harry wants more than anything to be more like his father. In an attempt to change himself something goes wrong and he ends up in the care of his hated Potions Master. Can they form the bond Harry has longed for his whole life? This story is AU and will not be following canon.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Title: Chapter 5: The Rules
| 11 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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I really like where this is going. I really hope you continue, because your off to a great start. you have me hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really hope to finish. It's not really in sight now, I still have a lot of ideas to where this story could go. I'll try my best.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey
| 29 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
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I can't believe you ended it there! That is a killer. An update soon please!
Author's Response: I have already written the next chapter together with this one. And that was the best part to devide the chapters. Even when it is a cliffy. The next one will be much longer.
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