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A few snapshots of how Severus would have dealt with Harry in a Corporal Punishment Harry Potter Universe. AU First Year - contains spanking. I think it's sweet despite the pain: Please don't read if you don't like it.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Jun 2009 / 20 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Snapshot Four - Would You Sir? 12 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    More, soon??? Please!? I like your writing, keep at it.

Prequel to Never Again. After the death of her husband, Lily Potter must begin her life anew, along with her son, Harry. Can they find comfort and solace with Master Healer Severus Snape? Or will old wounds from past and present keep them apart?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: An Absolutely Awful Day 18 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    Intense!!! I loved this chapter. Harry did deserve that spanking! The emotion is so raw, it makes the story all the better to read, keep going, I love your work.

    Author's Response: He did indeed, the little imp! This was an intense chapter and it'll get even more emotional later on.  Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    Oh, my god. So emotional, books, and movies never bring tears to my eyes. But this one did. I can't even imagine. I love it! Part of me wants to stop reading, and pretend everything will be ok for them. But the other part of me keeps reading, wanting to feel the emotion that this story brings out.
    Good job! I can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thanks, i feel like I'm watching Titanic, writing this, and the ship is sinking and everyone is dying.  Morbid, huh?  Part of me wants to stop writing because I know how it ends, but I can't do that, and this will be finished, but God I feel like I'm writing a Nicholas Sparks novel.

Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    It does have some similarites to the feeling of the titanic. I can imagine how hard it is to write. Have you ever considered writing, something origional. You could do it, I think. Like I said books and movies never provoke so much emotion from me as this story does.

    Author's Response:

    I have written several original novels, but none as sad as this one.  I'm currently looking for an agent to publish them.

    I do have one posted on fictioncentral .net under the penname Sevswife, Magician of Asgard, it's a retelling about Loki, Norse god of Mischief. You can check it out if you'd like.


Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    I will do that for sure. I love your work. It's great, very captivating.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! I hope you enjoy it! it's one of my favorites!

What if Harry went back into the past to try and change Dumbledore's mind about leaving him with the Dursleys. How would he change with a different childhood? This one is discontinued. I am rewriting it. New one same name just with v2 connected to title.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Godfather Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 May 2015 / 13 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Slytherinophobia 25 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    This is an amazing stort, and the plot line is great. You write well and I really enjoyed reading this fic. Will you be continuing this fic.? I really hope so, I would love to keep reading this fic.

Sickly and neglected by his caregivers, little Harry would not have survived were it not for the mysterious dark angel who watched over him, caring for him when he was sick. Harry never knew his name, until he attended Hogwarts and discovered a certain teacher bore a remarkable resemblance to his savior.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 46 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Heals like Magic
Title: Chapter 46: Tying Up Loose Ends 17 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    This was a great story!!! Are you planning a sequal??? I hope so!! I love the way you write!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much and yes, I am making plans for one.  But I need to finish up my other fic, Where Shadows Go, it's in a very different AU, where Severus is a Healer and Harry has been raised by him since he was two.  You can check out the other stories in that series while you're waiting.

Harry is just about to have his 10th birthday but something goes awfully wrong and the family is never the same and Harry eventually finds out the truth about who he is.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Oct 2008 / 20 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: So It Begins..... 20 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    Great beginning! I will deffinently keep reading if you keep writing! Great job!

Harry wants more than anything to be more like his father. In an attempt to change himself something goes wrong and he ends up in the care of his hated Potions Master. Can they form the bond Harry has longed for his whole life?
This story is AU and will not be following canon.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Feb 2009 / 17 Nov 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: The Rules 11 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    I really like where this is going. I really hope you continue, because your off to a great start. you have me hooked.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I really hope to finish. It's not really in sight now, I still have a lot of ideas to where this story could go. I'll try my best.


Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and a caring family to cope with.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Torture
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: Harry and his New Family - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed)
    I can't believe you ended it there! That is a killer. An update soon please!

    Author's Response: I have already written the next chapter together with this one. And that was the best part to devide the chapters. Even when it is a cliffy. The next one will be much longer.


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