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Greetings!  I'm Shoon!  I love reading Snape&Harry adoption/mentor fics, with hurt/comfort being my favourite.  I'm an absolute angst junkie to boot.

Torn Apart World is my first attempt at Fan Fiction, and I'm honoured that it has been embraced by so many wonderful readers.  Your kind words and encouragement meant the world to me!

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AU one-shot about Harry’s first detention with Snape. Take one mistreated boy, one misinformed man, mix well and watch what happens!

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Aug 2008 / 03 Aug 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Harry's First Detention 13 Jan 2009
Reviewer: Shoonasasi (Signed)
    Oh that was beautiful, so poignant.

    "All courage and nobility but the brains of a trout" - Hee hee, I liked that =)

    Author's Response: Thank you!! :)

Before Harry arrives at Hogwarts, the faculty have a meeting and decide that Harry will need a mentor to help him adjust, keep him out of trouble, and make protecting him easier. They decide that this person should the Head of the House into which Harry is sorted, presumably Minerva McGonagall. But things, of course, don't turn out as planned, and Harry is harder to deal with than anyone expected. Nobody asked him if he wanted a mentor, after all...

NOTE: This story has a prologue. It is not necessary to the plot of the story, but if you wish to read it, it is called(predictably enough) 'Prologue to Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat'

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jul 2010 / 15 Mar 2009
Series: Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 19: Slythindors 18 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Shoonasasi (Signed)
    Wow, so I read this entire story this morning and I'm absolutely blown away.

    I've never read such a defiant Harry before and I must say you've done a marvelous job with it. His mistrust and fear is heartbreaking and at times I find myself frustrated with his inability to care about himself and can't wait for Snape to finally break him down.

    I'm really looking forward to the eventual acceptance of someone caring about him. Do you think you'll ever allow him to be so comfortable with Snape as to let Snape touch him? I'm such a huge fan of Snape comfort, but Harry is in such an impossible place right now it's hard to ever imagine him hugging Snape or ever letting all his fear, pain, and misery out.

    In the meantime I'm thoroughly enjoying Harry's journey. Your characters are so different from anything I've ever read before, and though I was a little unsure if I'd like your version of Harry, I find myself becoming more and more of a fan with each chapter. I really like how Harry has friends in both houses too. It brings another dynamic to a brilliant fic.

    Thanks for sharing it with us!

    Regards,

    Shoon

    Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm so glad you like it! And thanks for the review!!

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