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Title: Chapter 16: Reparations
| 24 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Oh Moody needs to go and punish the Dursley's. Maybe Dudley needs to have the same injuries?
AU / Death Eaters besiege Hogwarts. A spell from Dumbledore is going astray. A cauldron explodes during potions class. And the old castle enfolds its own magic. Can some students survive the next twenty-one days?
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 15
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Completed: No
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Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Day five - Friday, sixth of September - part two
| 13 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Oh I can just imagine Snape handing out cartons of milk but you forgot about the graham crackers or is that an American thing?
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Retrieval
| 18 Aug 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Are you going to do a chapter or paragraph on how Fudge and the rest are reacting (besides panic) to the death of the Boy-Who-Lived? I know that Severus was trying to grab hold of something to slow down but towards the end why didn't he just turn him self over so he wasn't on his belly?
Author's Response: Have you been reading my notes or is it that predictable? Keep your eyes open for the next chapter.
One night the Veil turned in on itself and spit out two children. Once it is confirmed that the two children are Severus Snape and Siruis Black...and that both children, for some reason refuse to go with anyone other than Harry Potter... things get interesting. Will these two small boys, with the memories of adults, be able to fit in with the already growing family of Harry and Ginny Potter, or will it turn everything inside out?
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Title: Chapter 23: Screams in the Night
| 09 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Hmmmm, well I hope Harry does hex them. I like the thought that Ginny argued with the hat for Gryffindor too.
After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 30 Jul 2014 / 29 Jul 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man
| 11 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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To be honest this story is so confusing that I don't know if I will read anymore of it.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm really sorry to hear that. I can only suggest that maybe you give chapter 14 (parts 1, 2, and 3!!) a chance and maybe that would clear a few things up? I'm sorry I've confused you, but thanks for the opinion - I'll work on some stuff.
If especially strong-willed, sometimes the dead can interfere with the events of the living. Lily Evans is a very strong-willed woman and is not happy with the course of events in her son's life. She is planning, and slowly building her energy so that she can step in and set things to right.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7
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Completed: No
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Updated: 12 Sep 2011 / 11 Aug 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 13 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Oh Lily should have strangled him hard. Maybe to leave permanent marks on his throat to remind him everyday about his choice.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 14 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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What??? You can't just leave it here!!! Snape needs to fall off his chair or something.
Title: Chapter 7: Different Lessons
| 21 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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JKR left a lot of those moments, such as if under age magic use was forbidden (getting the notice about magic with Dobby) why didn't he get a notice about the lumos spell when he was reading under the sheets at night and his uncle Vernon was trying to catch him?
Author's Response: Tell me about it! My general theory for this fic, on the Map at least, is that the Twins didn't pay too much mind to Percy because while he was a stuffy prat, he wasn't a prefect. They planned to keep a closer eye on him, now he has authority. Once they found out about Harry and what had happened at the Dursley's, they started to keep an eye on him out of concern, and viola! Weird name they don't recognize showing up!
Title: Chapter 10: Week 10
| 24 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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I have fallen in love with your story. Will you post on what is to be the Dursley's fate? Is Dudley to be charged too?
Title: Chapter 16: Week 16, Christmas Week
| 05 Jun 2012
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
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Ut oh I can see two kids getting coal in their stocking.
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