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Planning Ahead by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
In which Voldemort’s plans are upset, Severus is annoyed, and Harry has a new career goal. There is also a kitten, because kittens are cool. Entry into the 2012 Prompt Fest

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 May 2012 / 09 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Planning Ahead 10 May 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    This was good, but shouldn't Draco have attacked and killed Pettigrew as a rat instead of eating the bones? Harry could have just destroyed the bones. This is going to added to my favorites.

The Day he was Pushed too Far by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Unable to deal with the pain and loss he felt during the third task; Harry slowly startes to fall apart,the others around him oblivious to it all. The loneliness continues to eat him up until one day, Harry finally snaps. Who will be there save him now and help him pick up the pieces?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 38 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2014 / 11 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Pushed Too Far
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price 21 May 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    woah you have me crying on this chapter, I do have a question. You wrote " He couldn’t have ended up just like Umbridge shot and bleeding on the floor" Was it suppose to be 'He could have'or 'He wouldn't have'?

    Author's Response: your right, its could have i was tired when i wrote that. thanks for pointin  it out

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: How to save a Life 21 May 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    Since Harry was looking at Draco when he pulled the trigger; is there magic connected? Something like if Harry dies so will Draco? Or will it be simply because of the shock that Draco's body is shutting down.

    Author's Response: his body is struggling to handle the shock...harry and draco arent connected at all

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Spreading the Blame 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    When Albus wanted to call it off did he forget that Fudge and Lucius wanted to have Harry kissed?

    Author's Response: Lol I think he might have forgotten..old age ya know

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Think before you speak 21 Jun 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    Will Albus get a clue that the rest of the school needs a healer?

    As far as the flamers, well it is summer time. Gather them together in a pit, put a rack above them, roast some corn maybe some ribs.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Albus will bring in the healers.

     Very good idea...since their at the beach anyways...lol


Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Planning 29 Sep 2013
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    Sorry that you are having a hard time with this story. I was always taught that you had to be careful of what you said as some day it might come back to bite you in the butt. Seems like Sev (and finally Sirius) is learning this lesson.

    :hands over a toasting fork loaded with a marshmallow to the author then sets down a plate of chocolate pieces and graham crackers: If the flamers are going to be here, you might as well make them useful.

Past Featured Story Good Night, Harry by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Harry only defeated Voldemort because he wanted a good night’s sleep. Entry in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts: blood-curdling scream, graveyard shift

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 May 2012 / 26 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Good Night, Harry 28 May 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    LOL I totally agree.

The boy on the Window Sill by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
When he peeked around the corner he saw a prone boy that couldn't be Harry Potter sitting in a window sill with his knees pulled to his chest and tears streaking down his cheeks. What was going on in the child's mind for him to be crying like that?

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 May 2012 / 28 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Window Sills
Title: Chapter 1: The boy in the window Sill 28 May 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    Awww

The Dreaming Days by Chucky starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Inspired by several stories on P&S. Harry Potter is not the BWL. James Potter died a decorated Auror. Lily Potter never died. She married Severus Snape and he doesn't get along with Harry.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2012 / 19 Aug 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Dreaming Days 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    The making of a Dark Lord, I do wish you would do one more chapter of maybe 10 yrs into the future when Harry starts his revenge? on the wizarding world or maybe when Lily and Snape realize what Harry has become and why?

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! My first (and so far only) reviewer...  I wasn't going to, but now I'm actually considering it. No promises though because I'm a bit worried about ruining it!

The Unexpected Snape by missyanne, Luck starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Severus thought he knew what to expect of the spawn of James Potter...until he walked into the Great Hall looking like Severus Snape.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Oct 2020 / 12 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 11 Sep 2014
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed)
    This is the first chance I have had to read your story and I am enjoying it. Will their detention be a basic lesson in potion ingredients and why they do what they do? Something that seems the Muggle born/raised don't know about.


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