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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Post-HBP. Harry runs into Snape. They manage to communicate for once.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Feb 2006 / 26 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Post HBP: The Next Meeting
Holidays at Hogwarts. Snape's POV as he does his job.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Feb 2006 / 26 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge, Christmas
Nice drabble. :) I liked Snape being "another shadow". I liked the allusion to events in the first book and I liked how you added <i>"Tracking is not impossible, no.</i>" Thanks for sharing! What does the mean? "I examine his presents three hours before the dawn. <i>Inside the warded circle, I wait for an explosion.</i>" Author's Response: I was trying to say that Snape was the one Dumbledore assigned to protect Potter, including making sure the gifts sent to him for Christmas aren\'t trapped with explosives or curses, or other nasties. Writing a drabble is a lot harder than I\'d thought. :) Getting across the point that Snape is the one assigned to protect Potter, and does so in the shadows while Dumbledore is the one who talks to Potter and pulls the strings of everyone, and all in 100 words (!) certainly took longer than I thought it would. But thank you for enjoying this! I think I\'ll fix it up a bit, tighten and clarify the wording a bit more... Harry is dying in the Hospial Wing a decade after the defeat of the Dark Lord. Snape is recalled from exile to tend to him, for reasons only Harry keeps mum about. Snape is not a very sympathetic or gentle care-taker, both because he is bitter and tired, and because Harry throws things at Snape's head.
There is also a horcrux involved, somewhere.
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Feb 2006 / 27 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Ack... I just reread it and realised the sentence structures were all messed up. And thank you (very, very much) for the review ! :) I\'ll try to update at least once a week, but what does h/c mean? Response to Fic Fest Challenge #16:
It is a little known fact that Parselmouths are sensitive to certain kinds of music... Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Feb 2006 / 28 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Music Sensitivity
Harry does something that causes a chain of events to happen. Yes, this is Blindfold, but this has an alternate ending. More inside if you wish to find out more, please read. The ending is longer, and different.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Mar 2006 / 09 Mar 2006 Series: The Blindfold Series - Challenges: None
There were things that needed to be realized for Harry to truthfully survive what fate has in store for him. Things that couldn't be proven to him in normal ways, but through one he doesn't like, and through one who fears him. Can he come to realize?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Mar 2006 / 09 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Snape knows Harry Potter's eyes. He knows how they've changed and how come they have. Yet Snape can't escape the memory of the young Harry who he met over old Chinese food, stolen bandages, and a dislocated shoulder. Wait and Hope for the world's end.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Mar 2006 / 09 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Picks up where HBP left off. Harry returns to Privet Drive one last time completely unaware of the evil that has taken root within Number 4. He must rely on his own strength and his ability to put aside past differences when Snape rescues him. He finds unexpected allies in his journey to destroy the Horcruxes.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Torture
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Apr 2006 / 21 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
:) Great chapter. I am so happy that Snape and Draco were there to help Harry. Poor kid. "I know of the Horcruxes, Harry," Snape stated bluntly. "I wish to help you find the rest to destroy Voldemort." AWESOME line. hehe, I loved it. Also, Snape replied hotly, disturbed by the extent of the injuries he’d found. You really conveyed that nicely there. As for things that could be improved on, I think that you have a really nicely plotted story and that it moves along very well. However, I think that you have a couple of gaps or strange order of action, things that the characters do. It's not really that bad, I had to think deeply about what exactly it was that I was noticing, but it is detracting from your story a little. Usually hurt and comfort scenes are exploited to their fullest without going overboard. For those who love h/c (hurt/comfort) the other parts of the story can be choppy and they won't care as long as the h/c part is done well. The writing was not quite fluid in this chapter to carry the h/c part. It's nothing really important but maybe just having an awareness will help. :) This made Harry pause;he |
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