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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Dark secrets and an even darker past threaten to destroy the boy on whom the entire wizarding world has pinned their hopes. Can Severus Snape find it within him to heal and accept the broken child of his nemesis, and in the process, ultimately heal and accept himself? (AU-ish, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - WARNING: mentions sexual abuse, but no details)
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape Categories: Healer Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Profanity, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Sep 2016 / 13 Mar 2016 Series: Right in Front of Me Trilogy - Challenges: None
Man, I hope it's the Order coming to help Snape and Harry, maybe even Dumbledore himself. Maybe then he will realize what a mistake it was leaving Harry with that family again. Wow. I hope Snape will be okay, Harry too. I have a feeling that Vernon Dursley's dead. I can't say I feel bad about it, but it may make things difficult for Snape. Then again, it was done in self defense, without magic, by a wizard who should still be hospitalized. Maybe Dumbledore should stand trial for creating the situation. Where was the watch on Harry that should have been happening? Great story, thanks so much for the update! Harry has always wished for someone to care, for a family of his own. On his birthday, he finds out that a certain Potions Master is his father, but Severus has finally settled into life with his other son. Can Harry finally have the family he has longed for, or will he always be the unwanted one?
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2020 / 17 Mar 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! There's definitely going to be conflict between the two that Snape's going to have to deal with. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I found it really amusing that Kieran is all the qualities Severus thought Harry was before he got to know Harry for real. The Quidditch book was just the icing on the cake. I'm glad that Severus told Clarice off - he didn't like her any way, but they way she seemed to hate Harry with no provocation... I wonder why that is. Is it because Harry is Lily's child and Clarice is jealous of Lily's standing in Snape's heart? Or is she a Death Eater or something? Funny that both of Kieran's parents are potions masters. He should be a natural at it then, right? I have a feeling that this next year at Hogwarts is going to be an eventful and dramatic one. I kind of hope that Kieran doesn't get into Slytherin. Obviously he won't be getting into Ravenclaw. Oh I really hope that Harry is okay so that he makes it to Hogwarts afterall! Thank you so much for the update, fantastic chapter! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it! You'll find out soon why Clarice hates Harry. Severus definitely got an eye opener to the personalities of his sons. The next year at Hogwarts is going to be a wild ride. Lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I know I'm putting Harry through a lot right now, but it's going to get better soon.
I love how the Twins protected their shop and Harry came to the rescue. I wonder what Voldemort was doing there, if it was just a coincidence or if Voldemort was looking for Harry or Severus. Great chapter! Thanks so much for the update! I am loving this story and am so happy when there is a new chapter to read. Thanks for sharing your story! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I was a little worried about the action scenes not being good enough, but I'm happy with how they turned out. It wouldn't be Harry if he didn't always come to the rescue. We'll have to wait and see what happens next with that spell! Plus Kieran and his mother are going to be back next chapter. Severus is going to have his hands full. Lol. Thanks for reviewing! :) No, Dumbledore did not use a picture of Severus Snape to teach little two year old Harry to call the man 'Da.' That is a ridiculous accusation and it will not be stood for!
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern Tags: Child fic Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Apr 2016 / 17 Apr 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks! Harry goes into town with the Dursleys. It turns out to be an interesting day.
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Apr 2016 / 18 Apr 2016 Series: None - Challenges: Candy store
Author's Response: Oh! Thank you very much. I am very happy you enjoyed reading my fic and wrote me a review. Harry starts training at the summer before fifth year and continues it during the school year with Snape.
Snape will be discovered, the Order will save him, Harry has nightmares; you know, just the usual stuff. In the last chapter Harry duels with Voldemort and shows us how powerful he really is. Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2016 / 02 May 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it
Umbridge was much more annoying in the book, she didn't seem to want to allow Dumbledore any authority that first night. Her part missing from this chapter seems to suggest that her character is different. Cloak is spelled cloak. :) I noticed it was spelled wrong as cloack a few times. Your Harry is compelling, I like that he seems more capable than the canon book Harry. I wish that the writing had more descriptions. The scene feels empty and blank. It makes it hard to get sucked into the story and see what the environment is like. Author's Response: At http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Fifth_year they wrote that fifth years had 6 class periods, that's why I wrote it. Umbridge's character isn't really different, I just don't want to mention her :D I'll correct it I promise :) Oh, yes, I have been looking for spelling mistakes for hours and I thought I didn't have any more... I always mess cloak up. :) I'll write more decriptions then. I've noticed how chapters in other fanfics were much longer, but I didn't know how to make mines longer. I'll correct that, too. :) |
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