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Reviews by Jan_AQ
During Occulmency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Severus notices something... off in Harry's memories.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: *plays spooky music* There are several not-nice options awaiting Harry. Dumbledore ruled out a wizarding orphanage, then there\'s the committed by Fudge route. There\'s also going into care, and technically, the Malfoys could probably petition for custody. Sirius\'s claim was never revoked because he was never actually convicted, and aside from the Lestranges, who are currently fugitives, Narcissa is Sirius\'s closest blood realitive. Also, in my version of reality, the Dursleys don\'t actually have guardianship of Harry. They have physical custody, but they never bothered to file the paperwork. It was never contested because of a derth of blood relations on both sides of his family. Snape told Harry about the prophecy in an effort to protect him yet again. If Harry dies and he could have done something, then he dies as well. Completely Slytherin motivations here...
Author's Response: One of the things I like about the books is that his friends are his support system. I don\'t think this kind of thing shows up enough in fanfic. As for the adults, well, they\'re feeling guilty for not protecting the one child desperately in need of it and they\'re reacting to that. Harry is mad still, actually, it\'s just buried beneath a heck of a lot of confusion at the moment. There will be a return of angry Harry, but right now he\'s unbalanced and trying to cope. The Voldemort dreams will be coming back--this is still currently filling in everyday space that\'s glossed over in OOtP. His own mind is providing enough horrors to keep him sleepless at the moment without Moldywarts intruding. Glad you\'re enjoying this little jaunt!
Author's Response: Well, I never managed to explicitely state it, though we may find out more in later chapters. The first years were actually from all four houses. It doesn\'t really matter to Harry; as far as he\'s concerned those that bully ickle firsties are scum. After all, first years can\'t defend themselves. As for Draco and Co, I\'m not exactly sure why they decided to play with the children. I suspect it has something to do with the fact that a Slytherin was playing with Mudbloods from different Houses, but the Junior Death Eaters aren\'t talking to me. I have no intention of reforming Draco, BTW. He\'s a spoilt brat and a bully--much of what Professor Snape has always thought Harry was. (The irony of his favorite student being exactly what he has accused Harry of is not lost on me.) Snape hasn\'t quite managed to justify what he\'s doing to himself yet. He\'s lumping it all under keeping his promise to Lily. If asked, he still claims to not like Harry at all. We\'ll have to wait and see how far he\'s willing to go... <eg> I\'m happy that you\'re enjoying this, and an update will be coming fairly soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! As much as I enjoy Harry\'s usual "fly by the seat of his pants" way of working, I decided that if he had known, things might\'ve been different. If an adult had been involved, things would have changed, hopefully for the better. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying this, and and update will be coming soon.
Author's Response: He could have, I suppose. But Sirius, unless he\'s in deep hiding, becomes a liability in a story like this. I hated it when JKR killed him, partially because she killed off Harry\'s only real support, and because of the method. I mean, really, throwing him through the veil of death? How ambiguous can you get?
The snake... I probably wouldn't have made her from the South, ending up in England. :P Silly Snake. I like her color and that she's going to bite anyone who harms Harry. Cute. She seems to be stealing the spotlight for awhile. Author's Response: Unfortunately, that's where coral snakes are from. It only works because she was bought in a pet store, not found somewhere. And being a magical version of the coral snake, it was logical that she'd be in the Magical Menagerie. As Sev pointed out, her venom is a useful potions ingrediant... There are only two native snakes in Britain, and it's illegal to make pets of them. IIRC, they're also non-venomous. I wanted to give Harry a snake that was 1) pretty 2) could grow to be pretty big and 3) was poisonous. Miss Sarah Sue Rae is really there to serve as Harry's confidante--he doesn't trust grown-ups, and she's a very non-threatening person for him to talk to. It's going to take along time to break through Harry's walls. Severus is trying, and it's starting to sink in that Harry is his complete responsibility. He figures that he's already up on the Dursleys by providing Harry with medical care and adequate clothing. Response to the FicFest Challenge #12: "6th year: A time for NEWT preparations, friends, romance, life altering decisions... and re-inoculations." Guess who is helping out in the infirmary when Harry comes in to get his?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Mar 2006 / 28 Mar 2006 Series: Vaccinations - Challenges: Re-innoculations
Response to Fic Fest Challenge #21: Summary: Timed fic. Write a Snape and Harry fic in one hour, including the words drowning, valiant, bullet, and meteor.
With Snape's help, Harry recovers his emotional balance after his godfather's death. Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Mar 2006 / 28 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Timed Fic with words
Response to Fic Fest Challenge #9. Set during OotP. When Snape is arrested, Harry is the only one who can prove his innocence. If he chooses to.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Mar 2006 / 31 Mar 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Snape arrested!
Whooo!!! :D Great! Wow, really great. I love how Harry was able to construct his answers in the courtroom to tell the truth- the way you as an author structured the proceeding to get to the topic of Voldemort was GREAT! Good job. :) I love the ending. I'm glad that now people will believe Harry. But why was Harry having problems stating his age? Was he trying to say no? Is he really 16? Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Awesome job. Harry's furious, Snape's easily angered. Suddenly, stewing rages can no longer be contained, and with magic forgotten, the two notable characters have a free-for-all fist match in the Hallway of Hogwarts. Consequences? Of course. Answer to Fic Fest Challenge #20
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Apr 2006 / 01 Apr 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Barenuckle Boxing
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