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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Ginny's is not the only valentine Harry gets. After eating the chocolate gifted to him by an anonymous admirer, Harry realizes he is very much in love with none other than the handsome Gildery Lockhart. But will Gilderoy love him back? Why is Hermione suddenly in love with Snape? And who is the mysterious blonde beauty Snape has been seen with? (Warning: Mention of rape. But no worries, it is not overly dark, and no inappropriate relationships between students and teachers actually happen.)
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: None Categories: Healer Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Out of Character, Rape
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Aug 2021 / 06 Aug 2019 Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!
Great update! Thanks for writing and sharing! Author's Response: All the Heads of House had to accompany their students to the Great Hall, because the basilisk is still at large, and safety precautions are being taken. Poor McGonagall has to herd cats. ;) Harry will manage to get himself in some trouble (again) before the school can be closed, so no worries. Thank you!
Author's Response: Harry will probably start being friendly with Luna a bit earlier in this timeline than he did in the original. I'm glad you like "my" Snape. It is hard to balance his in-character behaviour with him being a bit nicer to Harry than in the original without it seeming random. Hope you will like the later parts. It is totally my headcanon that he is rather rude to Dumbledore in private. And that Dumbledore doesn't mind. It's probably based on that scene where Dumbledore asks Snape to kill him, and Snape is angry while Dumbledore cracks jokes. It just seems fitting that Dumbledore chooses to let him rant all he wants because he knows Snape will do what he asks him to do in the end, anyway.
Harry's idea to tell the Durselys that he was killed by a basilisk is hilarious, witty, and so in character. I think most people can't write that sort of witty, dry humor that is so integral to the books, but you pulled it off. Well done! Author's Response: Thank you! I always try my best with the dialogue. Glad you like it. :)
I really hope that Snape can come up with a better way to help Harry than just telling Dumbledore. The part with the train and Snape getting Luna to go back was really cool. So nonchalant super power dream walker!Snape. I love how you add that coolness to his character. I'd love to see more of it. Thanks for the updates! And for writing and continuing to post here!
Lockhart... just gotta shake my head and be glad he's dead. What a mess. Poor Lily. I wonder that Lily was able to keep the pregnancy from James. I guess she used concealment charms? And delivered Rose during the summer? Poor Severus... having this baby dangling in front of him, wanting to be her dad at some point. Poor Harry feeling unloved and unwanted. Wow. This is deep. And complicated. I appreciate you coming up with it, and writing it in such a way as to make sense, and fit in, and be plausible. Well done. Great story. Thank you for writing and sharing it, and updating. Author's Response: I was thinking that she faked/provoked a fight with James to explain a separation for a couple of months and then made up with him. It is rather difficult to write such a deep story, I am more of a fun and light stuff type of person, but the idea wanted to be written, so ... I can only hope to do it justice. Thank you for commenting! Snape is assigned guard duty on Privet Drive one summer, and he finds Harry engaged in an activity he would never have expected.
Takes Place: 4th Year, 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Stern Tags: Addicted!Harry Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Character Bashing, Drug use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2019 / 19 Aug 2019 Series: None - Challenges: Unexpected activity
When Harry gets kidnapped from the World Cup, he will have to trust a mysterious voice that he doesn't recognize. Will he be able to trust the man behind the voice to save him and keep him safe until the end?
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Evil, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive Tags: Evil!Snape, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Kidnapped!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Out of Character, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Apr 2020 / 12 Sep 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Great story so far, very strong descriptions, good telling of emotions. I enjoy the drama and mystery. I hope Harry is okay! What if it is his magic burning itself out? Eek! Please update when you can!
I do wonder how Harry is going to come out of this though. Will Snape be able to maybe contact him through Occlumency? Thank you for updating and sticking with your story! :) There has to be some silver linings in life, right? |
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