the Black Cat
Ravenclaw!
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Severus Snape sits down and unwraps his burger, but wait, who's that kid with messy hair, dirty clothes, and glasses?
A response to the challenge The boy at McDonalds by nnjjj
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Rated: T
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Warnings: Bullying
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2022 / 08 Mar 2022
Series: None - Challenges: The boy at McDonalds
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2022 / 08 Mar 2022
Series: None - Challenges: The boy at McDonalds
| Title: Chapter 1: Mcdonalds | 15 Mar 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Aw, cute. I wish Snape had told Petunia something about not letting Harry out so late. Even though she seemed to not want him out so late, Harry did say he did it all the time and wasn't kidnapped yet.
I found it amusing that Snape enjoys a "mundane" burger a couple times a year.
Nice story, and thanks for writing and sharing. :)
When Harry was snatched and being hold in a cell by the death eaters, Snape is ordered to rescue him by any means.
As they recover, truths and revelations come to the surface. Along with matters of conflicts, family, duties and guilt.
The boy who lived, chained by a prophecy. And the spy, whose life soon to be owned thrice. Despite their grievances, their similarities create an unlikely bond between them.
“Without the sun, the moon, too, shall lose it’s light.” (Story starts at summer after year 4, and will continue till the end of deathly hallows)
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
As they recover, truths and revelations come to the surface. Along with matters of conflicts, family, duties and guilt.
The boy who lived, chained by a prophecy. And the spy, whose life soon to be owned thrice. Despite their grievances, their similarities create an unlikely bond between them.
“Without the sun, the moon, too, shall lose it’s light.” (Story starts at summer after year 4, and will continue till the end of deathly hallows)
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Character Death, Emotional Abuse, Out of Character, Panic attack, Physical Abuse, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Oct 2022 / 12 Apr 2022
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Oct 2022 / 12 Apr 2022
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 Impending | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Nice start! Poor Harry, he’s all discombobulated. I like how the chapter ends, with hope.
| Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Viola Sororia | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Beautiful ending to the chapter. Snape was smart to realize Bella was listening.
Some of the descriptions and writing are a little confusing, but I was able to understand.
I really love the attached artwork. Good start.
| Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Counting Blessings | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Wow. Why is Snape in so much pain? Is he injured? Or just too much Cruciatus? One would think he had pain potions to take, but perhaps he wants to keep his wits around him, and pain potions would make him foggy.
| Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Then he shall tear it by its wings, but shall not sever it. | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- This is a much better chapter, explaining what is going on, and easier to read.
Using Fawks is a grand idea. Interesting how they transfigured him into a little medallion or tiny plate. I hope their plan works.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A change of plans | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Wait, lower the wards? This is a new idea. I’m glad the Malfoys did as Snape suggested. Draco must be very confused.
I hope Snape manages to get Harry free when the time comes.
I’m enjoying the pace of this story. It is interesting and moving swiftly. I did notice that the writing is getting better. The tenses still change though. They need to match throughout. You seem to write in the present tense, but sometimes a past tense is used.
Well I am glad that Snape and Harry are still safe, and not caught. I am enjoying this story.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Imbalance | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Woah, amazing turn of events! I love Snape flying.
The potion theory and creation was fascinating.
| Title: Chapter 7: Ch 7 Everything will be alright | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Yay they are saved! Although the worse for wear, I’m glad they are finally safe and can start healing. That dagger is a nasty piece of work.
I really liked the dream, and how Snape was singing a healing chant.
| Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 No Promises | 30 May 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Cute chapter. I love that Harry knows about Snape and his mother knowing each other.
The little album of Malfoy and Snape pictures was sweet.
I hope Snape doesn’t bleed to death in the infirmary.
| Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Scotch and Tabby | 29 Jun 2022 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Love it, love it, love it. Poor Snape and his cat. It was so precious that McGonagall allowed him to snuggle her in cat form. I'm glad that Harry seems to be alright, but would the antidote work since the potion was tampered with unknowingly? Great chapter.