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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Harry Potter is involved in a potions accident which ends up with him de-aging to a foetus and implanting in the womb of Severus Snape, who is a bearer. Severus can no longer spy, to the chagrin of Albus Dumbledore, but he uses it as an opportunity to show his true self, the person he has been forced to hide for over twenty years.
And maybe, just maybe, he can save his students from the pressures of war. Mentions of physical, emotional and sexual abuse that various characters are trying to heal from. Many characters being bashed. I don't own Harry Potter. Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Abuse Recovery, Adoption, Baby fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Mpreg, Pregnancy, Sibling Addition Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Emotional Abuse, Out of Character, Physical Abuse, Rape, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Feb 2024 / 06 Aug 2023 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it. And yes, he will look like a mix of Sev and James. I hope you are having a wonderful day! xx
"You know what power a mother’s love has now, maybe that will stop you from doing whatever it is you will surely plan." Wow such a powerful statement! I love Severus standing up to Dumbledore for Harry. I worry about what Dumbledore will plan now. Maybe Severus should of let him believe that Harry is dead. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you are having an amazing day! xx Harry returns to school to start his fifth year. Information about the Department of Mysteries haunts him, the students are increasingly hostile to each other, and the Ministry has begun interfering at Hogwarts.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind Tags: Abuse Recovery Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Big Brother Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Bullying, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Aug 2023 / 12 Aug 2023 Series: None - Challenges: None
But Snape, yeah he just messed things up with Harry. I hope he thinks about what Theo said and takes it to heart. Author's Response: Thank you for review. I know stupid Snape, I think that the temper runs in the family:P
Spoiler Harry didn't talk to him more because he didn't know how to behave after what he found in the papers (that his older brother, as a child, was tortured and killed). He doesn't know if Theo knows, or if he should tell him, and how to tell him, so I think he just chose to postpone the confrontation by avoidance. Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts for his fourth year after a miserable summer at the Dursleys. When Draco finds out what is really happening at his relative's house, he opens Pandora's box into a decade-old secret changing the lives of Harry and several Slytherins forever. Add to it a new defense teacher, two overprotective godfathers, and a deadly tournament, Harry's fourth year at Hogwarts will be the most chaotic yet.
Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern Tags: Abuse Recovery, Injured!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Mar 2024 / 14 Aug 2023 Series: None - Challenges: None
Your Snape is spot on. Wow that he missed class. Your descriptions were wonderful to read. Fantastic pacing and emotions. Snape is wrecked. Harry is wrecked. They all are wrecked. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the update!
Dang Dumbledore really made some bad decisions placing Harry with the Dursleys. Harry is so self-sacrificing.
Great development of plot and pace. The only thing I noticed that needs clarification is one more line mentioning Harry made it to the bathroom on the train to change. It was very brief. “Have to use the loo, so I’ll just change there,” he replied as he slid the door closed behind him, not giving them a chance to question his actions. Harry kept his head down as he made his way back to their carriage... It seems like it could use an "After changing in the loo, Harry kept his head down..." Other than that it was a fantastic chapter. I wouldn't mind Draco and Harry getting together. And I like that Charlie, Sirius, and Remus are out and in relationships.
I really like your version of Draco. Noisy and acting, but also obsessed with Harry as much as Harry is likely obsessed with him. I like that Draco and Snape have code words for each other when they talk. I wonder who came up with them. The only thing that seemed out of place is that Draco was wearing trainers. I think he wears loafers, Oxfords, or other school shoes with his uniform. Maybe work or dress shoes. Trainers seem so Muggle-ish. But maybe they are trainers and I don't know. Fantastic chapter. Great pace. Compelling emotions. Thanks for writing and sharing this!
Poor Draco thought it was his fault. I love that they decided NOT to tell Dumbledore. Poor Sirius and Remus though, they are going to feel so guilty when they find out the extent of Harry's condition and where and when it happened. I'm loving your Snape, Draco and Poppy. McGonagall is very in character. I think the only thing I noticed that could use some improvement is some more physical descriptions of Poppy and McGonagall, and maybe Sirius if he has improved from being at St Mungoes. I had trouble visualizing them. Everyone else especially Harry had a fantastic level of detail and was easy to visualize. I am really enjoying this story so far! The hint about the appearance charm at 6 months is inspired. I hope they keep Harry in the hospital wing until he is better, or find a way to check up on him in a way Dumbledore won't notice. I'm sure the portraits saw Snape carrying Harry to the infirmary. I bet they might inform Dumbledore. Maybe Snape has a scar-reducing potion he can offer Harry later? I loved this chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Please update when you can. :)
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