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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 23 May 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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This is very good. I like your descriptions of the house and Harry unpacking all his wordly goods. So Snape is Papa to 9 kids! I am reminded a little bit of "The Sound of Music."
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 24 May 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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Aw, Harry is getting the flu.
Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dizzy
| 12 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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I had to pinch myself when I saw you updated, 'cause I love this story so much. There is such a casual ease to each section in the chapter. Little peaks into Harry's day-to-day life that are so real and smart and unforced. I love your writing. I look forward to the next chapter. you even got me into a Christmas spirit, and it's Easter tomorrow! I wonder how Harry did with his grades. Hopefully no Trolls. ;-)
Harry receives a very special gift on his 16th birthday that leads him to the help he needs...Snape is finding respite from his growing pressures and discovers one in need of help. Despite himself, he finds he CAN grow close to another living being. Only..."everything would've been so much simpler if it'd actually been a cat"...
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark
| 14 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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A green cat with green eyes! Very amusing. Harry sure had an adventuresome day. Remus his Dad? Wow. Didn't see that coming.
Author's Response: arg, I think I should have put a sign *be careful with the part of the conversation that Harry missed* ;-)
Snape is left dying in the Shrieking Shack after giving Harry his memories convinced that Harry is going to his death. When Snape dies, he is given a chance to send his soul backwards in time seven years to give Harry a chance for a better (and hopefully longer) life. Will switch back and fourth between being Snape centered and Harry centered.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12
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Completed: No
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Updated: 05 Jun 2009 / 17 May 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 18 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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Nice job! You pretty much had to summarize the entire 7th book! It is a very good summary, too.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to have to do something similar in another story I'm writting (its not going to be posted here due to lack of Harry/Snape interation) though it would be Dumbledore saying those things (he finds himself in a situation that he has no choice but to tell some people...). Hopefully I'll do a good job there as well when I get to it...
Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming
| 03 May 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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I'm reading this story through again, for the second or third time. I love it. Your chapter end notes are a hoot, too.
Title: Chapter 19: A Visit and Some Pasties
| 03 May 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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Mrs. Figg's visit was very funny!
As hidden secrets are revealed, Harry is forced to deal with a most unexpected, and unwanted, development. Sevitus. OOC maybe??? Maybe not???
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 10
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Completed: No
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Updated: 09 Aug 2009 / 01 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 06 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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Very well-written!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't do a lot of writing (this is my first effort at a fanfic), so it's encouraging to hear your thoughts. I appreciate the review!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 06 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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Oh no, poor Harry!
Author's Response: lol, yep. :)
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 06 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: FawkesSong (Signed)
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I don't blame Harry for trying to run away!
Author's Response: lol, no kidding! He's got a lot to escape from, does't he? But it will get better for him. Thanks very much for the review. This story's taking me a lot longer to write than I had envisioned, and the feedback is encouraging. :)
Author's Response: lol, no kidding! He's got a lot to escape from, does't he? But it will get better for him. Thanks very much for the review. This story's taking me a lot longer to write than I had envisioned, and the feedback is encouraging. :)
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