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Title: Chapter 11: Arrangements
| 21 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed)
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I love Snape's last line. It's so true; kids aren't subtle at all! I'm glad to have Hermione and Draco back in the scenes and keen to find out how Snape and Dumbledore will decide to deal with their unwelcome visitor.
Author's Response: No, not even Slytherin kids ;)! I'm glad you like Hermione and Draco; I love writing them. Thank you for reviewing!
Severus and Harry wake to find themselves in an unfamiliar place where Lily is alive. The boys could have what they'd always wanted - a home and loving family, but there is one catch: Lily says they are father and son. Will their past resentment ruin a potentially happy future? Is any of it even real?
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 5
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Completed: No
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Updated: 19 May 2012 / 21 Jun 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: The Meaning of Words
| 19 Dec 2011
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Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed)
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You've continued! I'm glad there's another chapter as there are lots of things I am looking forward too.
With the changes in history I'm curious about Harry's friends. Does he have friends he didn't have before, is he or they in different houses? Has James Potter married anyone? How is the house of Black? Are the Malfoy's more mellow since Voldemort is a non-issue?
Of course there is also the ultimate mystery, which world is real?
I hope there will be more chapters.
Author's Response: Interesting questions, I will aim to answer them over the chapters as they're not going to be stuck in that house the entire fic if Lily has anything to say about it! :P Thanks for your great review, really made me smile. There will be plently more chapters, don'y worry. Thanks again.
Harry Potter was dead, and the whole world mourned, particularly Severus Snape, at 5 am every morning. In response to the: Fix This Challenge by Nightshade sydneylover150.
Takes Place: 7th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Creature!fic, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Spying on Harry! Snape, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Title: Chapter 1: Fix This
| 23 Jul 2012
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Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed)
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love it. So tragic to think of a little boy ghost and a nice play on the prophecy. Really, I could've read thirty chapters of it. I wondered at the significance of the schedule and wanted more details on his ghostly life. Great idea.
Author's Response: Harry becoming a creature of habit was to give himself some stability during his time of trauma. Children in general thrive better with a schedule to follow, and Harry gave himself one by sticking to a routine of things he felt he needed to do, like going to classes to feel normal, looking for his body at night, following Ginny, and waking Albus and Severus early in the morning for comfort. It was also to show a change in the story when Harry suddenly breaks the schedule, to show that he has changed and that something is wrong. Thanks for the review!
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