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Break, Free, Luck, Death, Joy, Pledge and Pride by hpfanficfan starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
One story, seven chapters.
Seven drabbles, seven hundred words.
Four pages, ninety lines, three thousand one hundred and sixty characters (no spaces). Three thousand seven hundred and eighty-five characters (spaces).
Seven lines and forty-nine words in this summary.
One father, one son.
One engagement. One grave.
Zero Dark Lords.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2009 / 19 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge
Title: Chapter 4: Death 24 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    “He is dead. I killed him."

    Haha! What a way of explaining that someone who's been wracking Harry's life for almost two decades is dead. Go Snape! :)

    Very nice.

Title: Chapter 5: Joy 24 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Oh. Harry's very, er, candid. I really think it's more of a... girl thing to say "You take care of me, you love me." Ah, well. It's your interpretation of him, after all. :) And Snape's very self-deprecating. Heh. Thank God for Harry's big heart. I hope Snape won't torture himself (though, admit it, he deserves it) for too long. :P

    Author's Response: Well, hey. I'm a girl.  So there is my excuse. HA! Take that!

Title: Chapter 6: Pledge 27 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Lovely scene. I like this concerned, fatherly Snape. :)

Title: Chapter 7: Pride 27 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    The ending was a bit cheesy, but, overall, very nice drabbles. I really liked that there weren't any angst-ridden conflicts, rows, insults and moping - just snapshots of a serene, well-deserved happiness. Good job. :)

    Author's Response:

    Cheesy with a capital C....which is why I changed it.

     

    Thanks for reviewing!


Past Featured Story Some of His Best Friends Were Beasts by tambrathegreat starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
A bit of wishcraft, a Christmas pageant, and some beastly Wild Things bring Severus and Harry together as a family.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2009 / 21 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Creature Royalty
Title: Chapter 1: Some of His Best Friends Were Beasts 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Oh, this is so, so, so lovely! Absolutely marvelous story! I love it! (Or did I already say it?) It feels very special in a Christmas-y kind of way. The fantastic island and all the beasts inhibiting it was brilliant, and I loved how Severus and Harry were brought together in that place.

    A captivating, almost fairy-tale-like story! If I could, I'd give it twenty frogs. It's absolutely fabulous! Sorry to go totally gushy over it, but it really is a very, very nice story, full of tenderness and hope.

    Thanks so much for sharing this!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, I think I'm blushing. 

    Thans so much for the kind words.  I loved both Where the Wild Things Are and Harry Potter, and they meshed so well to bring Severus together with Harry.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

     

    T


Feeling The Spirit by Wands starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
The tree was gone. But it still got what it wanted. Severus had to admit to that.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2009 / 21 Dec 2009
Series: Seasonal winds - Challenges: Yes to Lemon Drops
Title: Chapter 1: Feeling the Spirit 21 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    This is so sweet and endearing. Loved the special tree and the way Severus gradually changed under its positive influence. A very heart-warming Christmas story. Thanks for sharing this!

Adventures in Babysitting by hpfanficfan starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 137]
Snape tackles his toughest mission yet, babysitting Harry Potter. 100 word drabbles.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2010 / 21 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Tug
Title: Chapter 27: Day 44 01 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Waaaaah! Translates to: more! Snape babysitting, well, baby Harry - how adorable. (Here me cooing?) I just love the way you bring out the better qualities in Snape. Very nice.

On a Christmas Eve by Ivy-Green starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Both Harry and Severus get what they really want for Christmas.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Dec 2009 / 22 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: On a Christmas Eve 24 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Such a sweet story (and just a little bit bittersweet). :) An easy and captivating read; you got me hooked the whole time, even though it was more or less predictable, that Snape would give Harry something of his mother's. Nonetheless, it was a lovely and heart-warming story. Oh and, Lockheart (especially his exchange with Snape) added the much needed splash of humour.

    Thanks for the wonderful Christmas story! :)

    Author's Response: So glad that you liked it. It took me FOREVER to get it to sound like how I wanted it, so I'm glad it came out alright. And yeah, not sure where Lockhart/Snape stuff came from, it just kinda came. lol Thanks so much for the review, an Merry Christmas to ya!! :)

Merry Christmas by grugster starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Part 3 of the A better Childhood series. It's Christmas, and the fourteen year-old Severus has to face Santa. Harry and Hermione are there with their own little families as well. HP/NT, CW/HG, AD/MM, AM/PP

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christmas 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Such a nice story. I'm still grinning as I write this review. The adults teasing each other and the interjections from all the children made up the perfect scene: enjoyable, funny and, above all, heart-warming. Thanks for sharing this wonderful Christmas story!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

I Wish, I Wish by wellyuthink starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Abandoned in the wilds of northen England, lost and alone, Harry stumbles across a small town and discovers a street called Spinners End...

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Christmas Day 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Lovely. Snape gets a boy for Christmas, and the boy gets Snape for Christmas. :) Harry's a dear. Loved that you didn't go down that "poor, traumatized Harry, the Dursleys were mean to him" road. :) Very enjoyable and light-hearted story. Thanks for sharing!


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