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Victory-Starr [Contact] Better be Gryffindor!
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I love to write and edit. You know those tests you'd do in school where you had to look at 5 different words and pick the correctly spelled one? Or "fix" wrong sentences? I loved those. ;-)

I've always got numerous stories in the works. I absolutely adore music. It's right up there with oxygen.

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With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Situation 12 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    I just wanted to drop ya a line and let you know how much I have been enjoying this tale of yours. You're such a creative writer and the plot is so original. I really like to review every chapter of stories I like, but this'll have to do for the night, as it is getting late.

    Anyhow, thanks! This is one of my favorites! :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I am so happy that you have been enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 26: The Tantrum 17 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Oh, an update!!! Yay! Thanks so much! This really is one of my favorite stories. Harry truly was being a brat. I love the boy, but being the oldest of 6 children in the family, I felt bad for Snape this time around. ;-)

    But Snape putting Harry to bed was adorable. Sigh. I love this story. Have I mentioned that? ;-)

    Good work! I can't wait to see what ya have in store for us next!

    Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for your review! I am so glad that you like the story so much! :) Sorry for taking so long to update!

Title: Chapter 27: Bubble and Squeak 23 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Haha, I'm willing to bet Harry will get into trouble and way too easily. ;-)

    I was so excited to get another chapter update so soon! And it wasn't even that short at all! Yes, you rock.

    This was great. I liked how Snape and Harry got up early and had breakfast together. And him being made to take a nap is cute. Though it's too bad he doesn't get his ice cream....

    Anyhow, this is great! I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter! :D

    Author's Response:

    You'd win that bet! :) Hehe. i just hope that Harry doesn't get lost...

    Thank you so much for all of your comments!


Title: Chapter 28: Neighborhood Block Party 28 Nov 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, poor little Harry. And poor Harry's foot, too. Bee stings hurt. And Snape had to go and ruin all the fun. Bouncy tents are fun. Humph.

    And what an ending! ::clunks head:: Family meeting??? About what? I'm not sure I can wait to find out! Sigh.

    Great job, as usual. I love this story. Already I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) Yes Snape ruined the fun, but Harry forgot that he wasn't supposed to jump around. He is rather small compared to some of the other kids afterall. Luckily Snape was there to help fix the bee sting. Marvelous potions! I can't wait to find out what happens in the family meeting too! I wasn't planning on one, and then Snape had to go and say that! Funny when the characters write the story themselves. :) Thanks for reading!

Title: Chapter 29: Family Meeting 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Yay!!! I am so excited! Loved this chapter, but felt sorry for poor Harry, not getting to play on the bouncy toy. Those are fun! :-)

    Haha, my favorite part was probably Snape carrying him to the kitchen though. Awwww.

    Great job! This is one of my favorite stories! :D

    Author's Response:

    Awww, thank you! :) Harry will get an opportunity to play on a bouncy toy again, but it won't be in this story I don't think. Haha maybe a one-shot with Snape? That would be cute.

    Snape pretty much wrote this chapter... he called the meeting, and he decided to carry Harry into the kitchen. It worked out so great! Thank you characters!

    I'm so glad that this is one of your favorite stories! Please keep reading! I hope that the chapters will come out faster now that we are at the more fun part of the story, but I know that I've been saying that for awhile. :} I'm going to try and write more than I read, maybe that will help.


Title: Chapter 30: Harry's Story 20 May 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, you updated! How exciting! I wasn't even expecting that and then there it was! Yay!

    Can't wait to see the next chapter. I love that Snape is gonna be the one to go and I have a feeling that'll be a good thing, cause I think that perhaps Harry's teacher is concerned a bit about him. Guess I'll have to see.

    Great work. I loved Snape and harry's questions and answers and how he didn't push for Harry to answer the question. Also, I laughed a bit nervously when Harry considered trying to find that potion. He would be so dead. Haha. :D

    Loved Snape carrying Harry to bed. I do believe he's going a bit soft... but don't tell him I said that. ;-)

    Author's Response:

    :D Thank you for all of your comments! I enjoyed reading all of them. Yes, Snape is going to go, and Harry's teacher is concerned, but I think that Snape will be more concerned than her. Maybe.

    Harry knows better than to try and steal something from Snape. At least, I hope that he does...


He didn't care about him anyway.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Sep 2004 / 25 Sep 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Denial 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, this was sweet. I enjoyed it. Loved Severus caring (but totally NOT caring) for Harry. ;-)

    Good work. :D

Harry Potter has made it through five years of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and summer break has only just begun. Unexpected and traumatic events leave Harry in more danger than ever before. An unlikely ally in Severus Snape may be his only answer as the situation deteriorates from bad to worse and Harry’s two best friends become pawns in a deadly game of cat and mouse.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Jun 2005 / 02 Oct 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Accident 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Oh gosh, this story seems different! And so... scary really. Very true to life. I hate car accidents.

    Good job so far! :D

Title: Chapter 2: When it rains it pours 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Oh gosh, you have got me so hooked on this story. I can't wait to see where it goes and what happens to Harry! :D

Title: Chapter 3: Wildwood 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Awww, poor Severus, so misunderstood. The slip up from Harry made me gasp though. Geez, this is good. And such long chapters also. Love it.


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