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Victory-Starr [Contact] Better be Gryffindor!
Call me: Nicole (female) Member since: 12 Jun 2009
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I love to write and edit. You know those tests you'd do in school where you had to look at 5 different words and pick the correctly spelled one? Or "fix" wrong sentences? I loved those. ;-)

I've always got numerous stories in the works. I absolutely adore music. It's right up there with oxygen.

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Past Featured Story Mine by Gillian starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 112]
Against his better judgement Severus Snape let a part of himself be used in a spell six years earlier. Now the consequences of his actions cannot be avoided any longer and Snape finds himself the father of a five year old boy-Harry Potter!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Feb 2007 / 15 Feb 2007
Series: Mine - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six 26 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Ooh, Lucius Malfoy is a slimy one. Grr. But good for Snape on bringing up Draco!

    I loved the scene of Harry rushing back up the path. That's a beautiful image right there. ;-)

Title: Chapter 8: Afterword 26 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww! I love the once-reluctant-daddy. The little bath and bed time ritual is adorable, along with the hair coming.

    This made me laugh out loud:

    "...he was more than a handful, he was a bloody vocation." Haha!

    Of course, the food hoarding is really sad. I hope Harry will feel safer soon.

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Seven 26 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww...

    "...Your smile's in your heart..."

    I think I shall cry.

    Oh yeah, and I also love your reference to Charlie Weasley and his dragons. ;-)

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Eight 26 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    That was an unexpected turn. I'm not sure how I feel about Neville coming to stay, but it could work I suppose.

    I do like how Harry was getting reassurance at the end though. That was sweet.

Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue 26 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Such a cool ending for a cute story. I don't know why, but I really just love the image of Severus Snape standing at the end of a long driveway, black coat swirling about him in the cold wind, just standing still. That is the coolest thing.

    Anyhow, I really loved this! This is going onto favorites. Good job and thanks for a great read! :-)

Fever by breannatala starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Harry's having a bad day. Snape's there to enjoy it. Or is he there to help? In Harry's current state of mind, he's not so sure anymore. Harry has a fever.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Mar 2007 / 04 Mar 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Fever 25 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Aww, that was cute. I'm looking forward to the one from Snape's POV. :-)

An Accident by Eniledam starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 44]
"Harry remained quite still for a moment, then hurled the mirror back into the trunk where it shattered."-Order of the Phoenix. Harry accidentally cuts himself on Sirius's mirror after breaking it. He then runs into someone unexpected, who has his own thoughts on the situation... Written for the "Accidental Cut Challenge"

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Jun 2007 / 17 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Accidental Cut
Title: Chapter 1: An Accident 21 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    That was cute. I liked how it was an accident, but Snape just totally jumped to the wrong conclusion. But as usual, Harry's tears made me wanna shed a few of my own. ;-)

    Good work!

Past Featured Story A Place for Warriors by owlsaway starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 554]
Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Title: Chapter 26: Recap 14 May 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    I am so happy you updated. And thanks for the recap. It's useful. :-)

    ::goes off to read::

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 14 May 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Again, I can't even begin to tell you how happy I am you updated. I don't even know what else to say.

    You have a way of making me angry at Dumbledore and yet feel sorry for him at the same time.

    I loved this line in particular though:

    “Hatred is the coward's revenge for being intimidated.”

    Loved that. Great chapter.

    -VS

Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue 14 May 2011
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Beautiful. Epic. Wonderful. :-)

    This line made me laugh:

    “I do not want to go prancing off into the sunshine and rainbows with you, Potter, pretending that the world is all kittens and roses.”

    I love your Snape. You write him so well, as opposed to most of the sappy, saccharine, OOC ones that most authors have a tendency for.

    I'm just so happy now. This is seriously one if the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. Thank you for finishing it.

    -VS


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