Slytherin!
Sequel to Brothers and Fathers. Tobias, Severus, and Harry are at Hogwarts and school is in session. But nothing can ever be easy for the Snape family.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kuroi_1992
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Oct 2010 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Oct 2010 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 16: Its a What? | 25 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) |
- Hey,
I found the sequel and I liked it very much. As i read the title of the chapter, I first thought, that Sev get twins. I lile that idea, but I don't think, that Sev could handle that beside his work as a teacher. So I'm glad, that is only one child an I think, a girl fits to that family realy good. The only danger I see for her is, that she will be very spoiled because as a girl she will get anything. Not, that I think of them to do that for she to be spoiled but neither of them really knew, what a girl needs.
Bye
Kuroi
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found the sequel and enjoyed the story!
Deidra will be spoiled without a doubt. But she'll be good for the family.
Thanks for reading!
Harry cannot forget Sirius’ death and feels guilty. When all the pain becomes too much, he decides to end his life. Will someone be able to stop him? Warning: explicit description of self harm, suicide attempt in ch.1
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Healer Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Nov 2009 / 09 May 2009
Series: The Final Breeze - Challenges: None
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Nov 2009 / 09 May 2009
Series: The Final Breeze - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 – Plans | 31 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) |
- Hey,
I read through your story today and I liked it very much. I look forward to a sequel and I think, I will read an other of your story's while waiting.
Kuroi
PS: Is there is any spelling mistake in here, blame my dictionary and the auto-correcting function of Google Chrome. I'm not capable of writing English in the middle of the night specially not in my holidays.
Author's Response: English isn't my mother tongue and so don't worry about mistakes. I really hope you will read more of my stories. Thank you very much for your review!
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After two weeks of torture by Death Eaters, Draco and Harry have to find a way to cope with all their memories. Severus, as their guardian, tries to help and spends some time with them at a therapy camp in the USA. Draco and Harry friendship
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Chapters: 66 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Apr 2012 / 09 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 66 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Apr 2012 / 09 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Awaking | 25 Jul 2010 |
| Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) |
- Hey,
since it is again in the middle of the night and in my holidays I thought I could try a review again. As you can see I found another of your stories and again I like it very much. It is an idea I never read before and is written very well. I do not have background infos about the topic but it seems realistic to me. What I do not really like is the fact, that they are not permitted to use magic at the camp but I see the reasons why it is that way. I hope Harry and Draco will learn a bit wandless magic at some point of the story because I would like to read a bit more magic and I would like to see how wandless magic can be performed and what are the limits within your story. I read some stories with wandless magic before and in the most it was overpowered and not realistic even for it being magic.
Kuroi
Author's Response:
Light Arrow will explain the different between wandless magic and normal magic in a chapter and at least Harry will learn to use it!
Thank you very much for your review!
When Harry goes through some...changes...the summer before his Fifth year, his relatives don't react well. Suddenly Harry finds himself homeless and alone, and learning to cope with yet another whole new world he'd never known existed.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2010 / 20 Dec 2009
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2010 / 20 Dec 2009
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 12: Liar | 25 Jul 2010 |
| Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) |
- Hey,
I read your story for some time now and I must say, your story is really good. At first I thought it is one of the Superpower-Harry-Stories in which he is a mixture of at least two different species I really often encounters in German which is one of the reasons why I settled to read English stories.
After I read the first few chapters you proved that thought of mine wrong because Harry really had problems with his new life. After a few more chapters I came to the conclusion that Snape is Harrys father and it seems wit every new chapter more fitting. So either my conclusion is true or you are really good to let people settle to false conclusions.
Now to your new chapter. I really like the way Harry, no Tobias is now and the way he deals with problems. To purposely get into detentions only to say his opinion is something he did in the book also but in the book he tried to stop himself before he got into serious trouble. So six detentions in one day I count as a real improvement of character. It was really time he stood up against Snape and even if I like Snape, I must say it is good that someone voiced against his opinion. Because of this I would have liked to read about his detention with Snape in this chapter. So I have to wait for the next one. Shame on you, you have me checking my mails for your new chapter more often then I do now and I thought look for mails once or twice a hour would be bad.
Beside the detentions I am eager to read more about Blaise and the other Slytherins and also about Harry dealing with the government. I hope he can convince them to stay at Hogwarts for his remaining years despite the fact that he is their heir.
All I have to say now is, that this is the longest review I wrote in English and one of the longest reviews I ever wrote. I think it is even longer then some English tests some of my class hands in. I apologize for any mistakes or bad formulations but we learn only formal English in school and things I most likely will never use. I don't write reviews in general because I can't write the things I want down in German probably and write them in English is not really better but I really like your story and I will try to write more than this one.
Kuroi
Author's Response: :0) Thanks so much for the lovely long review!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I really appreciate the effort you put in. That said, I can read German, so if it would be easier you could just review in your native language. :0) Thanks again!! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!!
Book two in the Outcast's Alley series. Having accepted his place in the Court, Tobias must learn how to fulfill it, as well as handle new revelations about his parentage.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Dec 2016 / 24 Sep 2010
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Dec 2016 / 24 Sep 2010
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Among Friends | 12 Dec 2016 |
| Reviewer: Kuroi_1992 (Signed) |
- I couldn't believe my eyes when I got an email that you updated. I wasn't online here for quite a while, I even had to search because I missed the switch from .net to .org. I love your story Outcast Ally and I was really sad when you decided to put the sequel on hold so you made my day today. I really hope you will keep updating, I don't care how long you take, I just want to know what will happen.
Kuroi