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Reviews by LaileeJane
After a series of tests to discover why Harry's magic has become erratic, a secret is revealed, one hidden for over fifteen years. But not all secrets disappear without consequence, leaving Severus to learn that potions cannot heal everything.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009 Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
Snow...if I could, I would! We've been cold enough too (which is rare) and still nothing! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story. It's really just a distraction. *Cough while I should be working on my original fiction novel cough* Uh yeah. That's not going so well. lol. Harry needs to be upset. If he wasn't, it would be rather unbelievable and he needs to show his emotions instead of bottling them up. He is going through so much, but I do have happier scenes in mind once we get there.
Poor Harry, Voldemort's a bastard! I like the emotion though, and I absolutely LOVE that Molly Weasley is sending Dumbledore a howler every hour on the hour. That is fantastic!!! I hope Harry can find it in his heart to be forgiving, and that Severus continues to try and get through to him. It must be so hard to be so helpless. Great work! Author's Response: Mardi Gras is such a fun time of year, isn't it? My university is so stupid when it comes to it. We have Fat Tuesday off, but not the Lundi Gras, the day before Tuesday, whatever you wish to call it. It doesn't make sense at all, but usually most professors decide to have a "library or conference day" scheduled for that day. Yay, I'm happy to hear you love the howlers. Molly isn't the type of person to just let something go, and I thought it was a funny light element to throw in. I'm sure Harry will find it in his heart to forgive Severus, but it was quite a shock to him and shattered his dreams a bit. Severus won't give up trying to get through to Harry. He understands the feelings Harry is experiencing and feels like he should've done something to ensure a situation like this didn't happen. Thanks! What's in a name? The-boy-who-lived, prophesied defeater of the Dark Lord, son of the supremely intelligent Lily Evans and talented James Potter, Golden boy of Gryffindor, part-time punching bag and house elf of the Dursleys and the bane of Severus Snape's teaching career, Harry's used to labels. Who would want Harry when they can see instead whoever they like instead? Having never been entirely sure who he is makes him a little too open to suggestion though and unfortunately for him, Umbridge wants to banish his old list of names and create a new one of her own.
Beneath the names others have branded him with will anyone be able to find Harry? Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Sep 2010 / 10 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you! Heh, yeah those detentions are just so full of fun huh, at least they’ll be eventful though ^-^ Have fun x
I want to scream at him to go to the damn infimary, but I am also oddly intrigued to see what Umbitch is going to do next to him! I thought for sure that Ron or Snape would have figured it out by now, so maybe the potion hides his wounds from others? Maybe she wants him to think he's going crazy. And that jerk Voldemort just HAD to call him then, didn't he? What a prick...didn't he know there was important things developing at Hogwarts?! :P I'm leaving to go out of town for Christmas holidays on Sunday....it would make my holidays complete if I had another chapter before I go! Pleeeease? For some reason Hermione really bugged me this chapter--Ron was being such a GREAT friend and she was just annoying and suffocating. You did a great job writing her, I just want to slap her though. I loved your addition of Myrtle, especially when she asked if he was dying. It sort of brought a bit of relaxation into the tense chapter, I enjoy an inkling of humor with my angst. I'm very glad that people are starting to notice...is it wrong that I hope Umbridge does something to push him over the edge, though? I don't think it would be too hard to do at this point, the poor kid. I love an angsty, tormented Harry! ~LJ, Slytherin Author's Response: Ooh, very very nice guesses, ten points and a more than a little awe are all yours ^^ Very well done, next chapter (or, when it comes to the potion, perhaps the one after) you’ll know ^^ I think he’s become a little too talented at hiding wounds and for some reason my characters are rather less perceptive than I’d had in mind ^^ but they aren’t completely hopeless so the next chapter should be better; and I’m so pleased that you want to see what will happen next with Umbridge! It may sound a little twisted but the idea for this fic was originally borne from curiosity at the depths of her inventiveness and cruelty; it’s been fun exploring her character ^^... because that doesn’t sound twisted at all ^^. It will be the last bit of ‘torture’ from her and it wont be as detailed or anything... well, I don’t think it is, others may have different opinions ^^ - hopefully it wont be very painful to read though ^^ - looking forward to finding out what you think of it ^^ Hehe, hmm, Voldy does have a HORRIBLE sense of timing. He’s like a two year old, temper tantrums when he isn’t the centre of attention. What will we do with him *shakes head* ^^ OH, I tried so very hard to write the next chapter before you were going to leave and I did get about half of it done because of it but real life doesn’t like me all that much right now and decided I should have some upset/pissed off readers on my back instead of an updated fic TT – blame RL... totally not my fault ^-^ - hope you had a fun trip though! Hehe, I love that your idea of me doing a great job of Hermione was to make her suffocating and annoying ^-^ I think it is a part of her character and I just played it up a bit (heh, possibly too much... whoops ^^) but if she annoyed you last chapter then I got what I was aiming for ^^ And I’m glad I was able to add that little bit of humour with Myrtle (and her complete lack of consideration or tact), no matter how morbid it may have been ^^ Oh I’m so so happy that you at least are looking forward to Harry’s last little nudge over the edge – I‘ve had so many people tell me they want him to find help NOW but without some huge mental break what would be the point, you know? I hope you in particular like the next chapter and thank you a lot for the faith that despite pushing Harry over the edge I’ll bring him back again (with lots of Snapey mushness ^^) Angsty tormented Harry ahead! ^^ Happy New Year!
Author's Response: OMG thanks! ^^and I bet the wait’s been awful in that case – sorry ‘bout that ^^ - I think I would’ve been a little too cruel not to let Sev find him after that (think I’d drawn it out enough ^-^) and thanks so much for that amount of dedication! I hope your daughter wasn’t too upset to be locked out though (whoops) – it was for Harry’s health if it helps at all ^^ *blushes madly* hehehe... well, I’m betting your opinion of me’s changed a bit since I last updated, hope you’re still interested in more chapters ^^
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! Hope you like the next one too ^^ Drabble written for Graciella's Dr. Seuss Challenge. Harry gets caught writing some interesting poetry during Potion's class...
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Sep 2009 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Oh, the Fanfics You'll Write!
Author's Response: Lol, that's ironic! I'm glad you got a good laugh! Thanks for reading. -P.G. One night a desperate wizard stole a baby . . .12 years later Snape discovers the truth--Harry Potter has a twin--the last person he ever expected. Can they learn to become brothers with help from Severus?
Takes Place: 1st Year, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 13 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Nov 2009 / 26 Sep 2009 Series: The Young Order - Challenges: None
Catastrophic events culminate in an unexpected kinship between some of Hogwarts’ most tenacious foes, while inciting bitter battles between best friends.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2013 / 30 Oct 2009 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll do my best to post the next chapter quickly. Harry comes back for his seventh and final year at Hogwarts a changed teenager… moody, disrespectful, and on edge, his friends don’t know what to do for him or what has happened to change him so much. Finally one man decides that enough is enough and somebody has to put their foot down to get Harry back under control… if not for Harry’s own well being, then for the sanity of one irritated Potion’s Master. Will Severus Snape be able to figure out what’s gotten under Harry’s skin, or will Harry push Snape over the edge before he gets that far?
Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry, Physical Impairment, Pregnancy Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Apr 2010 / 07 Nov 2009 Series: New Life - Challenges: None
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