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| A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help! i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame! [Report This]
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After the third task of the Triwizard Tournament, life in Privet Drive is even more horrible for Harry. Nightmares, chores, punishments... But his life will change when he finds a black cat.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Animagus!Snape, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bat the cat
| 05 Feb 2017
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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The Ministry removes Harry from the 'care' of the Dursley's at the age of three, placing him in the 'National Harry Potter Exhibit and Museum'. Harry spends six years blissfully unaware that every day dozens of people are paying to watch him go about his day through spelled walls. His every whim is catered to by a team of five caretakers, until the Ministry decides to close the exhibit down. Harry is placed in the care of Severus Snape, who must reverse the boy's spoiled upbringing and teach him to be a normal child again.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Adoption, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 3
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Completed: No
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Updated: 27 Aug 2016 / 23 Aug 2016
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Leaving Home
| 29 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting start I think we will have fireworks!
Title: Chapter 2: New Arrival
| 29 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done as you have explained Harry's behaviour very well
Title: Chapter 3: Conversations
| 29 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry indeed and poor Severus I'm sure this is not the last of the fireworks
Thanks to James' sacrifice, Lord Voldemort is defeated. Lily barely survives and is rescued by Severus. Years later Harry struggles to live side by side with his hateful and unforgiving stepfather in a very troubled household. Unbeknownst to both much greater challenges lie ahead.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Amnesia, Child fic
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Title: Chapter 11: The Battle Of Life
| 22 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So sorry you have been ill. Hugs and good wishes speeding your way As ever a brilliant chapter lots of angst and confusion for poor Harry. I think that if he was in that state Ron or Neville may have gone to get McGonnagal
Author's Response: I think so too! I had them not do it here because they would have witnesses him getting worse every time he spoke to her or Snape and generally avoid her as best he could. But I think I dropped the ball and did not properly set that up! Thank you so much for reviewing and your kind words! <3
Title: Chapter 12: Our Mutual Love
| 29 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a sad but brilliant chapter
Title: Chapter 13: A Christmas Carol
| 04 May 2017
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much a very good story well written and a realistic ending. You wrote Harry so well, he came across as a bewildered boy doing his best in dreadful circumstances, I was so angry with all the adults, they all let him down. I hope there is a sequel as I would love to know what happens to Harry
Title: Chapter 5: The Old Curious Shop
| 06 Oct 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Glad you are feeling better about being on here and your story. Lovely chapter and clever blend of cannon and your story with Hagrid, thank you so much for continuing it
Title: Chapter 4: A Tale Of Two Wizards
| 24 Sep 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Please don't delete it I so enjoy this story! Not good at story titles but how about Harry Potter and the wicked Stepfather.
Author's Response: Hehe.. That's very to the point ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 14 Sep 2016
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you very unusual and a good start.
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