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When tinkling music pervades Snape’s dungeon office on Halloween, Harry feels compelled to investigate the source.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Nov 2016 / 02 Nov 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 08 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    A lovely idea and so well written thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I kept turning over the haunted music box idea in my mind for a year and a half before I finally wrote this. Originally, I'd thought of Harry giving an antique music box to Ginny that had some vengeful spirit attached to it, BUT how would Snape fit into the story?? Eventually, I decided on the Snape/Lily angle, and the story practically wrote itself. Many thanks for reading and reviewing!

Harry turns to magic in an attempt to be free of his nightmares. He has found a ritual to summon the spirits of those whom one has wronged so that one may atone. But nothing involving the Boy-Who-Lived is ever that simple.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Desperate
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2017 / 07 Nov 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: In which the circle is cast 09 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very very angsty thank you

    Author's Response: You're welcome.

Title: Chapter 2: In which the judge is summoned 22 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very clever idea thank you

Title: Chapter 3: In which grievances are aired 28 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks!

Title: Chapter 4: In which a struggle ensues 14 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good blend of cannon and your plot thank you

Title: Chapter 5: In which the final grievances are aired 20 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thought Sirius and Lily were IC with what they said thank you so much for updating your excellent story

Book 2 of "Right in Front of Me" series. Voldemort is gaining power & Harry is sure that Draco is not to be trusted. Can Snape protect the dark haired boy he's come to love as a son, while shielding his precious family from the evils closing in on them? (HBP Year 6 - AU-ish w/ OC, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - mentions sexual abuse, but no details - NO SLASH!)

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Self-harm, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Apr 2018 / 22 Nov 2016
Series: Right in Front of Me Trilogy - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 01 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Wonderful angsty chapter thank you. So sorry to hear about your troubles, a horrible thing to happen to you especially after the illness of your daughter but I'm pleased to hear she is better. I wish you a better month to come

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 19 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a great blend of cannon and au

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! ^_^ And thank you for letting me know, because it's a fine line with this story. I always wonder if people would rather read something that is similar to the original, or something completely new. I hope people on both sides of the isle continue to enjoy it!! :)

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 10 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Lovely chapter! Great angst and then a lovely funny ending to the chapter thank you so much

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! This story is bound to get dark, so I'm trying to balance it with some fluff, as well. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying both sides!! Thank you for the review!! ^_^

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 11 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very interesting take on the story thank you


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