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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there  although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame!

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After the events of Sword of Slytherin, Harry and his family learn the meaning of normalcy and how it pertains to them. Is there any such thing as normal after all when you're a wizard or witch?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 3 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Sep 2017 / 23 Jan 2017
Series: Ties that Bind - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Nargles 01 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Lovely thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you. :)

After a horrible incident in the potions lab, Snape must look after Harry.
As much as they both hate each other, they learn that pushing away grudges can show their true selves.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2017 / 27 Jan 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 25 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loved the chapter but I find Severus' way of speaking a little too much of a child's way.

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 25 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a good chapter

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 10 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Like this story but the slang that Severus is using grates a little. I think he would always speak in what is known as the "The Queen's English" in other words he would not say yeah or sure.

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 14 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Good start thank you. I found a few sentences a little confusing.

    Author's Response: Please let me know which sentences have confused you.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Good chapter thank you

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 14 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Good humour thank you

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 13 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Interesting start

In the summer before his sixth year, Harry ventures outside the blood wards and is abducted by Death Eaters. After three weeks of torture in Voldemort's secret headquarters, he is rescued by the Order, but when he wakes up in the hospital wing, he is no longer the same boy. Will an unlikely connection with his draconian Potions Professor help him overcome his demons?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Self-harm, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Apr 2017 / 06 Feb 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Forgiveness 22 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very goo chapter lots of lovely angst thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

     

    Merope :)  


Title: Chapter 4: Attack 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very dramatic! Thank you an excellent chapter. I hope the new job works out well for you.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, I really hope the new job works out haha. 

    Merope :)  



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