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a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"
That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fmh
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 29 Jun 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Lump in the throat time, a wonderful chapter showing great sensitivity and strength thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review, I try to keep up the goo work ;)
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 12 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you a lovely chapter
Author's Response: Thank you ;) next chapters are in their way.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 16 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good chapter thank you
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you liked it Fmh ;) next chapter is only waiting for validation, so stay tuned my friend :)
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 24 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you so much an excellent chapter and such a good twist
Author's Response: thank you for your wonderful review and the time you put to read my story ;)
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 28 Jul 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very powerful chapter thank you so much, can't believe Severus took the risk of introducing Lily's half sister to Harry
Author's Response: thank you Fmh, as always your reviews give me the inspiration i need. can't wait to update for you guys ;)
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 03 Aug 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Poor Harry, you certainly put him through it! I feel a little clearer about the story as I found the jumps rather confusing. Thank you for your lovely and fascinating story
Author's Response: i agree! i really am cruel to him, but don't worry, things will work out in the end! the plot will get clearer in the next upcoming chapters and i'm glad you find it entertaining (wink!) thank you Fmh ;)
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 12 Aug 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Fantastic chapter thank you so much. I love the baby Harry bits between the angst of the present they keep Harry in front of us.
Author's Response: I love baby Harry too! He's just so darn cute! I'm trying to juggle the realism and angst, trying being the key word, so I'm glad you liked it ;) thank you so much! (blows kiss)
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 02 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you an interesting and rather difficult chapter James is such a horrible character but I'm not sure any of the others, apart from Harry, are any better they all want something from him and even Severus is behaving badly.
Author's Response: thank you sooo much for the review! and yeah, it was difficult alright, and trust me what you read of James in the last chapter was just a glimpse, and i agree, people do horrible things when affronted by their deepest fears or regrets or rather feel threatened for their loved ones. no one's perfect ;)
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 03 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Poor Harry left alone at a time like this! Thank you for your wonderful story
Author's Response: i agree, loneliness is the last thing he needed. thank you for the review Fmh ;) it made me feel a whole lot better.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 12 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you for a great chapter. I'm so sorry you are having problems with a reviewer, please report them I'm sure the administrators can do something, like get rid of them from the site. I am in awe of all our writers, you are a great bunch with wonderful ideas and stories. You personally write so many good stories and sometimes keep this site going! Please continue and know that we love you and your stories
Author's Response: thank you for helping me gain my spirits back Fmh! i already blocked the person so i don't think it would be a problem, but i will do that if it continues...i am in awe too, we have such talented bunch here and i have loved them from the very beginning, gain i'm flattered that you think so, don't worry! i will continue on and try to toughen up and deal with pests! i love you too and please stay tuned!!