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With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32
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Completed: No
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Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Neighborhood Block Party
| 30 Nov 2009
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I have really been enjoying this story. You write six year old Harry so well. I find myself laughing out loud at some of the things that happen. I loved this chapter. Poor Harry getting stung by a bee. I also like how Snape is slowly becoming a more caring guardian and I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your comments. :) I'm glad that you are enjoying Harry and the characters.
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I really like how you explain things in the opening chapter, and set the stage for the story, giving us necessary background. Very good work.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 01
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I like the idea that your version of Severus has a bit of a prankster in him, as well as how Dumbledore manages to manipulate him into taking Harry on as an apprentice.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 02
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Nice background on Severus. I like Nan. I wonder how things will go when he picks up Harry...
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 03
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Nice revelations, and realizations on Severus' part as he came to understand that Harry did not have the ideal upbringing that he'd imagined all along. I don't think Petunia was overly out of character, nor was Severus, given the nature of this AU.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 03
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Nice revelations, and realizations on Severus' part as he came to understand that Harry did not have the ideal upbringing that he'd imagined all along. I don't think Petunia was overly out of character, nor was Severus, given the nature of this AU.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 04
| 17 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Tricky how Severus didn't reveal who the Master Harry would be apprenticed to was until after the signing had been completed. I wonder what the blood mist was all about.
Title: Chapter 1: A Walk in My Shoes
| 11 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I really enjoyed reading this, and like the twist on the adoption story line, as well as the connection that was established between Harry and Severus because of occlumency. It was all very plausible.
Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You Know That, Potter.
| 11 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Sneaky, and perfect. Nicely done. I like how you wrote this altered version of events.
Title: Chapter 1: True Confessions
| 16 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Lovely story. I like the happy, hopeful ending.
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