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Title: Chapter 8: Spinner's End
| 05 Jun 2016
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I can totally relate to the difficulties that Snape has trying to find something of interest to match Harry's reading level. As a teacher, it can be very challenging to get, and then keep students' interest.
Title: Chapter 10: Return to the Unexpected
| 20 Oct 2016
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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It was great to see an update for this story. I liked seeing Erebus again, and liked that Severus is starting to realize the extent of Harry's abuse. I look forward to reading more when you have time to update.
Title: Chapter 1: A Trip Into Town
| 23 Apr 2016
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: The First and the Last Sight
| 23 Apr 2016
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Lovely summary of the story of Harry and Snape's experience throughout the books as seen through Harry's eyes. I really like these lines: "In Life
You had a lot of strife and toil
But it was not in vain
And you are now in a better place
Beyond the veil"
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I am glad my poem moved you, especially that line :)
Yes, when writing this, I really tried to put myself in Harry's shoes and in poetic form portray his and Snape's complex relationship throughout the years, told from Harry's POV. So,I am glad to hear you appreciate my summary of their story :D
"This is a nice hiding spot," Harry lies. The little professor scoffs. "I know better ones," he declares. "Oh yeah? Like what?" Harry inquires, actually a little curious to see what he'll say.
Takes Place: 4th Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaged!Snape, Deaging
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Jun 2016 / 18 Jun 2016
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Tight Spaces
| 04 Dec 2018
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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This was so sweet. I loved Harry's easy interaction with Little Snape. :-)
Hagrid sends an urgent message requiring Albus Dumbledore and Severus Snape to meet him at The Leaky Cauldron after giving Harry his school letter citing unforeseen circumstances in need of immediate attention. Unbeknownst to the Wizarding World, Harry has been mostly blinded, and is most certainly not a Potter. A BiologicalFather!Snape and Blind!Harry AU.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Revelations
| 15 Apr 2017
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Excellent opening chapter. It is very intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more and to seeing how Harry lost his sight, as well as how his other 'sight' works.
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
| 16 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Hopefully Hermione and Ron will be able to help find Harry, and bring him back to himself.
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
| 19 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Exciting chapter. I am glad that Ron and Hermione were instrumental in helping find and then lure Harry out, and hope that the blindness can be reversed. I look forward to reading more.
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
| 22 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Love this turn of events, with Harry moving in with Severus and Covey. Hopefully he will begin to heal mentally and emotionally now that he is physically healed. I shudder to think of what could possibly have happened that he'd subconsciously choose blindness over remembering. Excellent chapter.
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
| 27 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Another brilliant cliffhanger, with a great buildup to leave the reader properly waiting, eagerly for more. Lovely work. I like that Ron is the one who gives Harry the layout of the room, because it seems like something he would catch onto with his ability to think several steps ahead, and strategize in chess and other activities. I look forward to reading more.
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