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Title: Chapter 38: Pain
| 22 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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This was an excellent chapter. It was very intense and highly enjoyable. I had to bite back pains of sympathy for Harry and now I'm wondering what the heck is going on with his connection to Voldemort. Nice work.
Author's Response: The key word in what you said is connection... Which connection to Voldemort? We'll find out in the next chapter with Severus. ;)
Title: Chapter 1: Snape in Cape
| 11 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Makes me think of students drawing pictures instead of taking notes. Love the poem, and the profanity at the end seems rather in keeping with the way that teens do think, especially when caught doing something that they should not be doing. Thanks for the fun read.
It is extremely unfortunate for Harry Potter that once the bond of an apprentice is made, it cannot be undone… that is until the Master relinquishes control. It is unfortunate for Mr. H. Potter, graduate of Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry, that a mistake has been made, and he has become apprenticed to Master of Potions, Severus Snape. Response to "Apprentice Mistake Challenge" by ObsidianEmbrace
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Title: Chapter 5: The Princess
| 21 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Excellent chapter. I really enjoyed how you brought the Weasley's back in and what you've got going on with the 'princess'.
Title: Chapter 8: Facade
| 16 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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A very entertaining read, which does lend itself to a sequel. I like how you summarized how things would have ended had you carried the story onto culmination, rather than leaving it up in the air.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 20 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Intense and wonderful. I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 3: Truth Be Told
| 11 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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This was a fun read. I liked the glimpse of a 'dark Harry' that you gave us, and am happy that he didn't stay dark in your story.
Title: Chapter 17: Day 28
| 22 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Excellent drabble. I like how Severus' anger resolves itself into relief. Nice work.
Title: Chapter 18: Day 29
| 22 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Love it! Severus is beginning to care for baby Harry, in spite of himself. Excellent drabble.
Title: Chapter 19: Day 31
| 23 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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I could so picture this. Total fun. Loved it.
Title: Chapter 21: Day 34
| 23 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
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Severus seems to be softening. I like how well you capture the limited language range that a child of Harry's age would have as they learn how to manipulate sound.
Author's Response: really? I know nothing children. But...if you want to know how a baby talks, just youtube it. Its what I did to get an idea of how a baby behaves and 'talks'.
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