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Call me: Kristal Jonasen (female) Member since: 12 Nov 2009
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Not much to say about me.  I like reading and writing Harry Potter fanfiction.  I have been enjoying reading works on this site for a couple of months now and decided that I might as well make it official as I have been having difficulty submitting reviews with the captcha thing as it is always telling me I have misentered the numbers. [Report This]
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Reviews by darkorangecat

Adventures in Babysitting by hpfanficfan starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 137]
Snape tackles his toughest mission yet, babysitting Harry Potter. 100 word drabbles.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2010 / 21 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Tug
Title: Chapter 22: Day 36 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    One almost wonders if Snape will miss those three am wake-ups. Well-written.

Title: Chapter 23: Day 38 25 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    I love this line: "I will myself to detach myself from Harry..."

    There is a sense of meloncholy in this drabble and hope as well. Nicely written.

Title: Chapter 12: Day 18 26 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Love the cliffhanger. Nice build up to it. Looking forward to the next one.

Title: Chapter 20: Day 33 27 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Loved this one - simply fun to read - especially, "...the female staff have been…talking to me." Can't wait for more.

Title: Chapter 24: Day 40 29 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Lovely juxtaposition in this drabble. Good thing little Harry does have Severus wrapped around his fingers.

Title: Chapter 25: Day 41 01 Apr 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Another wonderful drabble. I like how Severus has grown to care for Harry and is trying to, as best he can, in his current state, prepare him for the future.

Finding Home by silverstargirl starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 146]
Harry, having learned of his uncle's plans to step up the abuse against him, decides to run away. At the same time, Severus Snape, having been dispatched to ensure he is safe, discovers that Harry is abused and decides to kidnap him.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Child fic, Evil!Albus, Runaway
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Apr 2014 / 26 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven 29 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Excellent update, I really liked the look into Petunia's thoughts as well as the revelation as to just how far Vernon was willing to take this thing with Harry. Hopefully Fawkes will be able to hold Albus off long enough for Severus to spirit Harry away.

    Author's Response:

    Vernon is a foul individual, isn't he? Though, I have to say that Petunia isn't much better. I haven't quite figured out how, but they will pay for their dastardly ways. Fawkes is going to be important in the escape. 

    Thanks for reading my story and for reviewing. I really appreciate it. 


Moon Fire by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 488]
A guilt-stricken Harry finds solace with a mysterious black stallion, never dreaming it's the Animagus form of Severus Snape. But Harry has a dark secret, one that could mean his death unless Snape discovers it in time. AU, no slash! Angsty!Harry Mentor! Animagus! Snape, some Draco too! HP/HG

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 19 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 14: Midnight Advice 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    It seems like Harry is beginning to become comfortable with Severus and testing the boundaries of what he can and cannot do and what will happen to him if he pushes Severus. I like how realistic you wrote this stage of their relationship and how you left us hanging worrying about Hermione. Now I am wondering how she will fit into the rest of the story and am excited to see what will happen next.

Title: Chapter 15: Midnight Tragedy 18 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Heartbreaking and beautifully written. You captured the horror of what happened to the Grangers quite well, showing how one moment they were enjoying dinner and the next, Hermione's world shattered around her. That is how tragedies often take place, when we least expect them and seldomly with warning. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter and seeing how Hermione and Harry work together to restore Snape to his rightful mind.

Title: Chapter 16: Midnight Struggle 20 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed)
    Awesome chapter! I really like the dynamics between Harry and Hermione as well as Jasmine and Moon Fire and Harry and Moon Fire. I am looking forward to seeing what Andromeda Tonks brings into the mix.


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