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Inter Duos Tutela by RaeKelly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Severus, Harry and Draco are now officially a family, but an escapee from Azkaban threatens their happiness. A new Defense professor befriends Harry and Draco, telling them stories about their parents and teaching them to defend themselves against the Dementors surrounding the school.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Deaging, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Mar 2010 / 23 Nov 2009
Series: The Young Order - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 16 Dec 2009
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    Aww... a quarrel over a broom... too bad Siriushadn't thought of this. Now Remus and Severus are even more angry at him than before...
    I want to know how Draco will react to his missing blanket - that was quite mean by the way. I do hope they'll become friends eventually. That would be great.

    Update soon!

    Greetings, Baltaine

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    Aww^^ I love it!
    The punishment for Draco and Rae is fitting, really well thought over, I must say.
    And the way Sev and Remus dealt with Sirius was also fitting... quite a bit of payback for his two meansest pranks. Wonderful.
    I'm waiting for the next update!

    Greetings, Baltaine

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 01 Jan 2010
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    Oh my... the twins got into trouble again! *lol*
    And Draco into even more trouble than Harry because he just lost some points. Poor cutie...
    I hope they at least'll get the map - then the trouble would have at least been good for something.

    Keep up the good work^^

    Greetings, Baltaine

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    :)
    Great chapter, just as always^^
    SO the boys got their well deserved punishment^^ great choice, btw :)
    I also liked the little part in which Sev retrieved the map - I just hope he won't make good on his plan to bring the cloak and the map into his vault... So the boys must somehow prove him that they can be responsible... Riiiiiiiight??
    I like Audrey. She's refreshingly persistent, isn't she ;) She wants Sev to tutor her, so she comes in person and persuades him^^
    You might consider pairing them up with each other^^ the look on Draco and Rae's faces when they find out would be sooooo priceless^^

Not Quite So Terrible by Leilia Snape starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Harry has been de-aged and guess who has to take care of him? Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: 'Would you care to explain why you appear to be kidnapping my familiar, Mr. Potter?' and Boggart Under the Bed

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #9 Prompt Fest 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Nov 2009 / 25 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite So Terrible 29 Nov 2009
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    This was sooooo cute!
    And I love the cat! :)

Merry Christmas by grugster starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Part 3 of the A better Childhood series. It's Christmas, and the fourteen year-old Severus has to face Santa. Harry and Hermione are there with their own little families as well. HP/NT, CW/HG, AD/MM, AM/PP

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Dec 2009 / 24 Dec 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christmas 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    How cute :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

Fawkes' Secret by severusphoenix starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Fawkes has a secret. Challenge Fest entry. Response to A Fawkes Secret by little-sun.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape, Fic Fests > #11 Challenge Fest 2010
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jul 2010 / 03 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Fawkes' Secret
Title: Chapter 1: Fawkes' Secret 05 Jul 2010
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    Wonderful - but you could continue this, you know. A sequel in which they practially beat the crap out of Tom... I mean, Sirius can be cleared, with Peter in their hands. So building up forces shouldn't be a problem :)
    Anyways: I really enjoyed reading this. The flashbacks were really cool: I always wondered how things might have been had Severus and James been friends all along. Gee.... Hogwarts would have shaken in fright with all the ingenious pranks the would have played :)

    Thanks for posting this... it would be sooooooo great if you could consider writing a tiny little sequel... *puppy-dog-eyes*

    Greetings, Baltaine

Caring for Yin and Yang by DaughterOfAres, autumnamberleaves starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
A series of events leads to Severus Snape becoming the guardian of not only Harry Potter but Dudley Dursley as well. Disclaimer: I own nothing of the Harry Potter Universe. In response to Foolish Wishmaker's Challenge 'Snape's Boys'.

Takes Place: 2nd summer, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2010 / 13 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Snape's Boys
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed)
    Now you've got me almost totally confused... No... scratch the almost :)
    I hope you'll update this soon, so I can begin to understand what's going on^^

    Author's Response:

    I"m sorry I confused you. The next chapter is up so hopefully that will explain things a little bit more.

    Thanks for reviewing!



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