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Penname:
| Lady Lanera [Contact]
| Better be Slytherin!
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| Member since: 21 Feb 2010
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About me:
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| I am an avid Celestial Serpent fan (Snape/Sinistra), so it's a bit odd that I'd be on here. However, I wholly agree that Snape should have adopted Harry, so most of my stories will have that be the end result. My current active story right now is Undone Present.
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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 09 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Your descriptions are amazing. I can almost see everything happening. So kudos to you on the chapter. I do hope that someone gives Harry something for that supposed cold of his. Again, very nice chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you like my writing and enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 04 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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hmm... it's rather sad that no one is noticing Harry's distress. Well, in Snape's case, he's just ignoring it, but still. I'd have thought Remus would have at least tried to comfort Harry. Very nice chapter. You're capturing Harry's grief nicely. :D
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 04 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Why is everyone ignorning Harry so much except Snape? This is the one question I'm wondering about. Very nice chapter again. I like the slight change in Snape's demeanor. He's slowly changing. Again, nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 04 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Remus is starting to annoy me. I'm not sure if it's just because he's grieving for Sirius to or what, but Snape is right, though. Remus was told to give Harry the last potion. I'm loving the Snape and Harry dynamic. Very nice chapter again. Though, I'm just wondering why everyone but Snape is noticing Harry.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 04 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Okay, so we learn some of Remus' reasoning. I like the explanation. But I definitely feel very sympathetic with Harry. Very nice chapter. I like Harry's rushing down to find that Remus is gone. That seemed like a good way to end the chapter. Good chapter.
In a small coffee shop in London, Severus meets a side of Harry that both unsettles him and intrigues him. From here, a game is played.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 13 Jan 2011 / 13 Jan 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Augury
| 13 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Very nice, Rose. I'm confused as all hell, I think. Well, I'm actually not sure if I am confused or if I am. I have a bit of a Sam/Harry thing going on right now, writing this review. Though, I do know that I like how you tie everything together: Snape's habits, Harry/Sam, the trains, the homeless guy, everything. So for that, I congratulate you. The way Severus tries to talk Harry back into remaining a bit like Sam was nice too (the basin comment) Very nice.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I confused you, Lan! What do you mean that you have kind of Sam/Harry thing going on? Not sure how they work? But thank you for reading and thank you for reviewing! :)
Title: Chapter 1: Playing Cupid
| 15 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Awe... I love it, ladies. Snape seriously wins an award for best actor, doesn't he? Though, that's what Harry gets for being bored and listening to Fred and George. :D Nice story.
Author's Response: thanks Lan. yes, snape really is a great actor, arry never saw it coming!lol
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 15 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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oooh... I love the interesting take on this, especially with Severus working in MOM and being a Seer. Very nice.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Unspeakable Discovery
| 15 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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I know I should feel sorry for the Dursleys, but I don't. Though, I love Severus imparting his magic on Harry to save the boy. Very nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 15 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Awe... Severus is handling Harry very well. *onto the next chapter*
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